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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Winds Of Tomorrow ~*Marge Tindal*~ I feel the winds blowing from dusk to dawn sending me into tomorrow with no map drawn The winds of chance blowing me your way No sense of direction have I of where I am today But, oh, the tomorrow wind gently buffets my pace sending me your way caressing your face The winds of sure direction have taken me to your loving arms just where I should be Wind-swept am I breezing along caressing tomorrow with our song ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Marge, this is so lovely. It has a real calming effect. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This is light and feathery Marge, with a hint of your dreams m'lady...very nice!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eloise~ Thank you. The winds pick us up, blow us about and then calmly set us where we should be. I'm glad you found it calming. So did I.  Devina~ Thank you, hon. Yes, just a hint. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Marge, this is a perfectly lovely poem...good rhyme flow and very nice imagery...i could feel the mystic wind's breeze on my face...nice work! I love you Is all that you can't say- Years gone by and still... Words don't come easily Like I love you, I love you... But you can say baby... Baby can I hold you tonight Maybe if I told you the right words At the right time you'd be mine... Tracy Chapman |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JanetMarie~ I am so glad you enjoyed it. It seems to calm the winds in my soul. You are good company. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I like this a lot.!!! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You and the wind have something in common, Marge. You both blow me away! Another excellent poem. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VanDana~ Thank you, honey. Balladeer~ And my true response would get me blown directly to 'Adult'.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
I find this quite "A-Stute" , perhaps you should join us Marge ? Doc |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Now, Doc ... You should do a 'bed check' ... I'm already there ! Tee Hee ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Very soothing and comforting, Marge, to take us away from the everyday! Thanks! Corinne |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ this is positively dreamy! Love it! -SEA |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Dear "Mom", sorry I haven't written sooner... but as usual, you already seem to know what's going on in my life! Gracious, lilting, and of course, comforting! thanx... |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
A beautiful feeling, isn't it. I remember it well. Thanks for allowing me to pause in your moment...LOL Wonderful poem, Marge. Michael |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ I love to frolic in the wind. It fairly dances me about. Thank you ... glad you enjoyed. SEA~ I just love it ... that you love it ! Serenity~ Why, of course I know ! That's what 'mom's are for ! Thanks, kiddo. Michael~ It is beautiful .. each and every time. And YOU will feel it again. You may 'pause' anytime you want. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sweetie, Your poetry is always uplifting Your passion is unending You make my heart smile Liz |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is lovely Marge. James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth, my friend~ My goodness. And to think ... I'd have settled for one out of three !  I'll settle for knowing you smile ! James~ Thanks, love. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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