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RobertB
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0 posted 2000-02-21 11:10 PM


The Woodsman

Though sharpened iron on stone
wheel spinning dulls itself in wooden fodder
chips spit like the hiss of a droplet
dancing on a hot griddle
hoping for the perfect pancake
to fuel the madness of a woodsman
vented by a double-bitted axe.

RB



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WhtDove
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1 posted 2000-02-21 11:16 PM


Woohoo I could picture this one!   Great!

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There's only two ways you can go...
One way you can save your riches,
And the other will save your soul.
Rich Mullins

Denise
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2 posted 2000-02-21 11:29 PM


I agree, Robert! Your words always paint a vivid picture! Well done!

Denise

serenity blaze
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3 posted 2000-02-22 12:01 PM


Love This!!!  Vivid, expressive, and spiritual...


serenity blaze
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4 posted 2000-02-22 12:01 PM


Love This!!!  Vivid, expressive, and spiritual...


serenity blaze
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5 posted 2000-02-22 12:01 PM


Love This!!!  Vivid, expressive, and spiritual...


serenity blaze
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6 posted 2000-02-22 12:01 PM


Love This!!!  Vivid, expressive, and spiritual...


RobertB
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7 posted 2000-02-22 06:55 AM


Thank you Becca and Denise. You too Serenity Serenity Serenity!!

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