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RobertB
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The Woodsman

Though sharpened iron on stone
wheel spinning dulls itself in wooden fodder
chips spit like the hiss of a droplet
dancing on a hot griddle
hoping for the perfect pancake
to fuel the madness of a woodsman
vented by a double-bitted axe.

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Woohoo I could picture this one!   Great!

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One way you can save your riches,
And the other will save your soul.
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I agree, Robert! Your words always paint a vivid picture! Well done!

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Love This!!!  Vivid, expressive, and spiritual...

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Love This!!!  Vivid, expressive, and spiritual...

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Love This!!!  Vivid, expressive, and spiritual...

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Love This!!!  Vivid, expressive, and spiritual...

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Thank you Becca and Denise. You too Serenity Serenity Serenity!!

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