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sonjes
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since 2000-02-18
Posts 564
North Carolina

0 posted 2000-02-21 05:13 PM


I am very sorry.
   -can't help-
I know where you are;
   -get out-
I was there once.
   -i did-
Look somewhere else.
   -stay away-
I will hold you;
   -no more-
Laugh with you too.
   -at-
I will only hurt you;
   -destroy-
Hurting me to do so.
   -Conquer!-
Or maybe I will change.
   -YOU WILL-


**Another poem from the archive**
(Bear with me on this one, I wrote it during my mean period).

© Copyright 2000 Sonje Scharinger - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-02-21 05:20 PM


well, I dont know about your "mean" period..but this is GREAT!!! very well expressed emotion with the unique and creative use of the"subliminal messages" in between each line... I really enjoyed it!
take care, janet marie

 I love you
Is all that you can't say-
Years gone by and still...
Words don't come easily
Like I love you, I love you...
But you can say baby...
Baby can I hold you tonight
Maybe if I told you the right words
At the right time you'd be mine...
Tracy Chapman



Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-02-21 05:24 PM


LOL...hey I just saw your reply to my poem...thanks..and come on over to Dark Passions and see us anytime...I better sneak back there before Isis catches me...smile...
janet marie

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