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Your Kiss :-)

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jeremyc
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0 posted 02-21-2000 04:31 PM       View Profile for jeremyc   Email jeremyc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jeremyc

how, with mere words can one describe your kiss
that which fills my heart with such unmerited bliss
that which as soon as is ended, i miss
that feeling I get when together we press our lips
with your hands on my shoulders and mind on your hips
...
...
oh, i give up, a poem can do it no justice
but do you think, for at least trying to write you this
that when next we meet, i can feel your sweet kiss?


hi everyone...tell me what you think...i wrote this today after taking my biology test...thanx in advance..ps, this was written for my girlfriend, but i haven't given it to her yet..
© Copyright 2000 Jeremy - All Rights Reserved
Cerenity
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since 02-16-2000
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1 posted 02-21-2000 04:52 PM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi jeremyc,

That poem was so great and I think you should give it to her, she will more than likely love it.

WELCOME TO PASSIONS

Cerenity-1
devina
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2 posted 02-21-2000 06:02 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Welcome Jeremy...So glad to see that you're in love...we need more love floating around in here!!! Anything that's written with such feeling...will mean the most to the one you love...in other words- GIVE IT TO HER!!! hehe

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
jeremyc
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3 posted 02-21-2000 06:13 PM       View Profile for jeremyc   Email jeremyc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jeremyc

thanx everyone...actually this isn't really my first post (although close to it)...i just got a new "handle"...but i never got welcome before, so thank you  )  any other comments?
Severn
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4 posted 02-21-2000 06:44 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Well you can have a welcome now from me: Welcome!

I'm sure your girlfriend will just love this (and probably won't mind obliging either!)

K

 'Writing sharpens life;
life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath
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5 posted 02-21-2000 06:53 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to Passions (again!). Please check your email!  
jeremyc
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6 posted 02-21-2000 07:07 PM       View Profile for jeremyc   Email jeremyc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jeremyc

hey, poet devine, thanx a lot...that was really nice of you..and thank you all for the welcome...you'll probably be seeing a bit more of me, so get used to it..  )
 
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