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onechance
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since 2000-02-21
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0 posted 2000-02-21 03:06 PM





why do they all come here
forever, I may not know.


I guess some come for attentiom missed.
maybe some come to write their thoughts.
some simpley come to learn, and grow.


there are so many thoughts to share
all those people typing out there.

like the sun shining in the early morn
people patching live that are ripped, and
torn.


torn , ripped, shattered, tattered, crushed.
we all seem at times, to fall behind a silent hush.

we all come, for one reason or another
like a family mom, dad, sister, brother.

all stands true, come far or near
somtimes we just need a place to cry in our beer.


[This message has been edited by onechance (edited 02-21-2000).]

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mystery
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since 2000-02-21
Posts 79

1 posted 2000-02-21 03:42 PM


I like your poem, that is a good question why do we come here??
I feel that this is a good and productive way to express our thoughts, emotions and so forth. Many people don't know how to communicate verbally, so this may be a good way for them to express themselves. For whatever reason people come here, I enjoy reading many of the poetry, It kind of gives you an idea of what are on people's minds.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-02-21 04:08 PM


Hi and welcome to passions...nice to meet you...
this poem is GREAT!! you said many of the things I think about this special place... I am always so inspired when I come here...I look forward to more of your work!
take care, janet marie

 I love you
Is all that you can't say-
Years gone by and still...
Words don't come easily
Like I love you, I love you...
But you can say baby...
Baby can I hold you tonight
Maybe if I told you the right words
At the right time you'd be mine...
Tracy Chapman



Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
3 posted 2000-02-21 04:20 PM


Hi onechance,

This place called Passions is a place
to share and give to others wanting the
same as you, to express them selves
freely without judgement.
I hope to read more of your thoughts soon.

WELCOME TO PASSIONS

Cerenity-1

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
4 posted 2000-02-21 09:18 PM


Just like it says in the corner here, couldn't have been put better...

A home without a wall,
Our haven without ends,
A circle we all call
Our Family of Friends!

I hope you enjoy it here! This is where we come to share what we have in common with the best bunch of caring people you'll ever meet!

 <*\\\><

There's only two ways you can go...
One way you can save your riches,
And the other will save your soul.
Rich Mullins

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
5 posted 2000-02-22 03:10 AM


welcome to passions, nice poem    
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2000-02-22 06:08 AM


Nice thoughts onechance.   I'm here because I like to communicate and share.   James
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