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Mornin Ralph " ( shhh ... keep it down )
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Mornin Ralph " ( shhh ... keep it down ) |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London 
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"Mornin Ralph" ~~~ You wake in the morning your face a fright hollow cheeks and your gills dead white Your eyes sunk back lost without a trace And your mouth you can't describe the taste Your twisted back makes your stomach sore and the rolling waves engulf the bedroom floor  When you bend at the waist to groap for a shoe Up comes Ralph with some of last nights brew You hear the phone as it starts to ring and you make a beeline for the big white thing You try to lie back down but you get back up then you crawl and shake all kinds a weard stuff You're called to breakfast it's about to start You contemplate death as your next resort ... You swear ... ... you take an oath ... YOU'LL NEVER DRINK AGAIN HA HA ... YAH RIGHT ... ... next week ...  Hello again! ~~~ I'm not ugly! I'm just visually challenged! [This message has been edited by Rex Allen McCoy (edited 02-21-2000).] |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
A twisted poet can write about "just about" anything, I suppose! Vomit? Where did this topic come from? HAHAHA! Got a laugh out of me anyway... For this, I thank you! |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Funny: yes Subject: No Love it: yes Do this again: No way lol Ps at a certain age you learn to avoid this, trust me lol. The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Some poems can make one green with envy and some poems can just make one green! I LOVET IT !!! |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
Uggggh! I am happy to say I have not met up with Ralph for a long long time...*L* Clever...and definately entertaining... I love the time and in between the calm inside me in the space where I can breathe... Sarah McLachlan |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
ROFLMAO!!!!! I didn't know what to expect with that title, but looking back, it's perfect! Great job!Bobbycat =^..^= ~~Blessed Be!~~ |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
This was hilarious  . Not what I expected either, but still, I LOVED IT  .~Susie~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Those mornings can be brutal, can't they? It is amazing that they are not enough to make people quit drinking forever..... I enjoy your style, Rex. You always bring a smile Denise |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Not the most tastefully written poem ... but its' story brings De Ja Vu throughout the world Rex [This message has been edited by Rex Allen McCoy (edited 02-22-2000).] |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
you know I got drunk only once in my life ... and this was the result ... it cured me and I wrote this to the many who have never found a cure ... thanks everyone for your kind responses Rex |
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mini poet Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 56Canada |
"I'll never drink again" Thats what I said last time! But I still havent. UGhh it was terrible. hahhaha |
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