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Corazon
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0 posted 2000-02-21 11:54 AM


actions, no forethought,
destroying pillaging
not even stopping long
enough to enjoy the plunder
just actions
any afterthoughts
are executed and buried
quickly in my survival kit
this is my life
and I will destroy it
if I want to...

but
my mind refuses
to sequel my actions
someone's gotta tell me
when I am wrong

but again the question...

do I run
retreat scatter withdraw
or stand my ground
and fight for my life?

and do I want to?


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suthern
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1 posted 2000-02-21 12:15 PM


If you don't want to fight for your life, you're in for a butt-kicking from a fellow o&o!!!! *S* You just try giving up and see how quickly I tell you you're wrong! LOL.

Oh... this wasn't for me? (innocent look) Hmmmm... In that case... well done! *S*

RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023
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2 posted 2000-02-21 12:39 PM


You fight cause Suthern has a really hard kick  *g* and anyway, you're worth fighting for..

HUSG

 Ouvrir mon coeur et âme

Raul Noriega
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since 2000-02-12
Posts 11

3 posted 2000-02-21 12:40 PM


Thought-provoking.  There is an air of sad sentiment in this piece that is beautiful and giving.  I'd love to read more.  Very nice.
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

4 posted 2000-02-21 12:43 PM


I like your style, and can certainly relate
to the message.  But give up?  Myself, I am
like a horror movie, just when you think I'm
done with, something in me makes me pop up
again,to kick some butt.  Looking forward to some kick-ass poetry in the future.  You've definetly go what it takes.

Corazon
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5 posted 2000-02-21 12:59 PM


thanks all, and nope this was for me...lol...but maybe a good swift kick is what I need...thanks my friends  
Breathe~
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since 2000-02-05
Posts 315
Washington...
6 posted 2000-02-21 01:14 PM


You had better want to fight...or i will be in the line behind suthern!...*grin*

We all have moments where it just takes everything to just drag ourselves out of bed...and face the world we just want to hide from...

I know you got what it takes...dig deep Corazon...you gots peeps rooting for you....*smiling*  including me...


 I love the time
and in between
the calm inside me
in the space
where I can breathe...

Sarah McLachlan

Corazon
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209

7 posted 2000-02-21 01:15 PM


thanks breathe....you know I post these cause *I* need to write them, not for support, but with comments like yours and the above...I sure am glad I have peeps pulling for me...thanks
devina
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since 1999-10-28
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Cali
8 posted 2000-02-21 02:12 PM


Well sweetie...all I can tell you is to keep going, something might be waiting for you that you didn't even know was there!!! (And I'll give you a good swift kick...if that's what you need dearie!!! G*)

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Balladeer
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9 posted 2000-02-21 04:47 PM


If you have to ask if you really wantto or not.....then, of course, you don't. Excellent writing again.
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