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mystery
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since 2000-02-21
Posts 79


0 posted 2000-02-21 10:57 AM



I remember the times when he seduced me slow/
He wanted perfection and so he went with the flow/
He lured me in with his heart which was the hook/
And enticed me with his mind which was the line/
I still bare the scar from my Valentine/
Or was he just my Casanova/
Because I wasn't the only woman who had let him get over/
Gallantly attentive to all of our needs/
Assuming that I was fulfilling/
But I couldn't satisfy his greed/
Sometimes I laugh because I wanted him back at any cost/
But the next fool can have him because it wasn't my loss/


 

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mystery
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since 2000-02-21
Posts 79

1 posted 2000-02-21 11:41 AM


This is just to inform people that I am new on this site, I have been writing poems for a very long time and a friend informed me about this site. She told me that there are very interesting poets in these forums and that I should expose some of my own works, so I did. please feel free to critique my works, I would appreciate it.
Thank You!
MYSTERY

January Flowers
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since 2000-02-01
Posts 209
South Carolina
2 posted 2000-02-21 12:18 PM


Mystery-
will always get my vote for strong signals of
"was not my loss".
This is an affirmation of healing
and moving past a "not so great" experience.
RIGHT ON!

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

3 posted 2000-02-21 12:25 PM


mystery, I admire the emotion, especially the
strength of your resolve...I wish only that
I had your capability to direct love, command
it and own it, as you appear to do...Instead,
I fear that love owns ME, and I live at the
whim of its' mercy.  Nice work.  Welcome.

whiskey
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since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278
Australia
4 posted 2000-02-22 09:25 AM


Great poem I enjoyed reading it, it was very powerful , Welcome to passions  
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