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Cast Away His Love

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mystery
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0 posted 02-21-2000 10:57 AM       View Profile for mystery   Email mystery   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mystery


I remember the times when he seduced me slow/
He wanted perfection and so he went with the flow/
He lured me in with his heart which was the hook/
And enticed me with his mind which was the line/
I still bare the scar from my Valentine/
Or was he just my Casanova/
Because I wasn't the only woman who had let him get over/
Gallantly attentive to all of our needs/
Assuming that I was fulfilling/
But I couldn't satisfy his greed/
Sometimes I laugh because I wanted him back at any cost/
But the next fool can have him because it wasn't my loss/


 
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mystery
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1 posted 02-21-2000 11:41 AM       View Profile for mystery   Email mystery   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mystery

This is just to inform people that I am new on this site, I have been writing poems for a very long time and a friend informed me about this site. She told me that there are very interesting poets in these forums and that I should expose some of my own works, so I did. please feel free to critique my works, I would appreciate it.
Thank You!
MYSTERY
January Flowers
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2 posted 02-21-2000 12:18 PM       View Profile for January Flowers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for January Flowers

Mystery-
will always get my vote for strong signals of
"was not my loss".
This is an affirmation of healing
and moving past a "not so great" experience.
RIGHT ON!
serenity blaze
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3 posted 02-21-2000 12:25 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

mystery, I admire the emotion, especially the
strength of your resolve...I wish only that
I had your capability to direct love, command
it and own it, as you appear to do...Instead,
I fear that love owns ME, and I live at the
whim of its' mercy.  Nice work.  Welcome.
whiskey
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4 posted 02-22-2000 09:25 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Great poem I enjoyed reading it, it was very powerful , Welcome to passions  
 
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