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nonsense
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since 2000-02-20
Posts 8


0 posted 2000-02-21 12:54 PM


Trapped    

trapped, I am always a victim
Entangled in the web of life
Drained of all feelings
This pain cuts me like a knife
Confused and frightned
I don't know what to do
My arms and legs are bound
How could this be true
My mind is like a maze
With many ways to turn
I went the wrong way
When will I ever learn
Scared and insecure
Like a lost and lonley child
This feeling of terror
It's driving me wild
Take a strand from this web
Spin me away from this wrap
Free is where I want to be
Far away from this evil trap


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SacredHeart
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since 2000-02-20
Posts 2

1 posted 2000-02-21 01:15 AM


Very well done.. It makes me reflect at the times I too have struggled.
Hope to see more of your work
SacredHeart

sonjes
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since 2000-02-18
Posts 564
North Carolina
2 posted 2000-02-21 07:21 AM


The spider of life has caught me a few times along the way.  May I say, without sounding cliche, that being scared can sometimes make us stronger.  Make us better people.  I don't know what else to say, that hasn't been said before.  Again, I like the raw honesty that comes forth in your poetry and I will continue to look for more.
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