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nonsense
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0 posted 02-21-2000 12:54 AM       View Profile for nonsense   Email nonsense   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nonsense

Trapped    

trapped, I am always a victim
Entangled in the web of life
Drained of all feelings
This pain cuts me like a knife
Confused and frightned
I don't know what to do
My arms and legs are bound
How could this be true
My mind is like a maze
With many ways to turn
I went the wrong way
When will I ever learn
Scared and insecure
Like a lost and lonley child
This feeling of terror
It's driving me wild
Take a strand from this web
Spin me away from this wrap
Free is where I want to be
Far away from this evil trap

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SacredHeart
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1 posted 02-21-2000 01:15 AM       View Profile for SacredHeart   Email SacredHeart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SacredHeart

Very well done.. It makes me reflect at the times I too have struggled.
Hope to see more of your work
SacredHeart
sonjes
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2 posted 02-21-2000 07:21 AM       View Profile for sonjes   Email sonjes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sonjes

The spider of life has caught me a few times along the way.  May I say, without sounding cliche, that being scared can sometimes make us stronger.  Make us better people.  I don't know what else to say, that hasn't been said before.  Again, I like the raw honesty that comes forth in your poetry and I will continue to look for more.
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