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Angel
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0 posted 02-21-2000 12:36 AM       View Profile for Angel   Email Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Angel

            i
          want
        you here
     to wipe away
     my tears and
      to make it                 i
         okay                   need
                               you with
                             me here and
                             now to make
                               me smile
                                again
               i
              love
           you more
         than anyone
         can you say
          the same
            to me



 ~Susie~

© Copyright 2000 Susan Acacio - All Rights Reserved
mama duck
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1 posted 02-21-2000 12:59 AM       View Profile for mama duck   Email mama duck   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mama duck

HOW ADORABLE!! TEAR DROPS. NICE WORK.
devina
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2 posted 02-21-2000 01:08 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

This is really endearing!!! Hope that last question is YES!!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
Lost Dreamer
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3 posted 02-21-2000 09:30 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

I love how you did this, very creative.
Angel
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4 posted 02-21-2000 10:40 AM       View Profile for Angel   Email Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Angel

mama duck~
Thank you so much, you're too kind  .

devina~
Me too! Now I'm Still waiting on an answer  .

Lost Dreamer~
Thank you so much too  !  


 ~Susie~

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5 posted 02-21-2000 12:58 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Angel I love this!!

I love the form and the words. . . they truly come from the heart. . .

Reminds me of cummings or some of the "concrete" poems of the 60's and 70's. . .

Really beautiful!!
---------------------------------------------

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Angel
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Sven
I'm so glad you enjoyed it   although the 70's and especially 60's were just a bit before my time..


 ~Susie~

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7 posted 02-21-2000 06:03 PM       View Profile for Songbird   Email Songbird   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Songbird's Home Page   View IP for Songbird

Very creative and sooo.. sweet!
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8 posted 02-21-2000 07:47 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

Romantic yes I say it is
Very nice design with this
Your poem is so nice
Sweet

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

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9 posted 02-21-2000 10:16 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Angel~
THIS IS GORGEOUS !
I LOVE IT.
LOVE THE CONTENT.
LOVE THE FORMAT.
Just LOVE it.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Angel
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10 posted 02-21-2000 10:26 PM       View Profile for Angel   Email Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Angel

SeptSong
Thank you so much. I'm so happy you enjoyed it  .

HelmutB
Your words are too kind, sir.  You're making me blush  .

Mentor Marge
All of your beautiful poems in the form of pictures were the inspiration for this. I can only hope to be as talented as you one day  .


 ~Susie~

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11 posted 02-21-2000 10:35 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

So beautiful!  Very creative format, I love it!  

 *Krista Knutson*

"Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~

WhtDove
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12 posted 02-22-2000 12:02 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Let me add that I love this too! Original

 <*\\\><

There's only two ways you can go...
One way you can save your riches,
And the other will save your soul.
Rich Mullins
Elizabeth Santos
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13 posted 02-22-2000 12:11 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

So simple and sweet, yet it says so much
Very creative
Liz
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14 posted 02-22-2000 06:31 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

"I love you more than anyone
can you say the same to me"
cause if you can I'd love to stay
and if you can't I'm on my way.
James
Angel
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15 posted 02-22-2000 03:33 PM       View Profile for Angel   Email Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Angel

Alwye
Thanks so much!

WhtDove
I'm glad you liked it

Liz
Thank you too

jmlee12345
I love those lines  .


 ~Susie~

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