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Songbird
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Two eyes behold thy beauty
Two hands I hold in mine
Two lips speak love
Whisper Sweet
Two arms hold me close to you.

Bosom to bosom
We embrace
Two faces reflect
The joy we share
Two lovers limbs entwine

Two hearts beat
As one
Two souls
Drop
Anchor
In
The
Night

© Copyright 2000 Marcia Estep - All Rights Reserved
devina
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1 posted 02-21-2000 01:12 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

This was nothing short of breathtaking!!!! Such romance...sigh...I remember vaguely what that's like!!!lol

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
Lost Dreamer
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2 posted 02-21-2000 09:45 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

This is beautiful, your love sounds delightful.
hoot_owl_rn
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"Two souls drop anchor in the night"....Oh, I do love that line....lovely , dreamy poem  
Meadowmuse
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I must echo Hoot Owl...I loved that line, as well. This is a superb piece of writing, Septsong.
Songbird
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Thank you for your comments. I thought maybe this one would get booted over into Adult Forum, guess there must be a fine line somewhere. Glad you enjoyed it.
Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 02-21-2000 11:07 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Oh, how lovely!! This is such a beautiful poem, but I do think it's in the wrong place.
It should be in a publication.
Good work, Septsong
Liz
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In the space between moments


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Romantic and beautiful.  Exellent work, Septsong, I really love this.  

 *Krista Knutson*

"Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~

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8 posted 02-22-2000 01:32 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

SeptSong~
Gosh !  This is lovely.

'Two souls
Drop
Anchor
In
The
Night'

What a lovely thought.
Wonderfully done.
~*Marge*~



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Parker
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Septsong, beautiful romantic poem, I really loved the ending, its hot.

Parker
Martie
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Simply lovely!
 
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