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Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

0 posted 2000-02-20 08:34 PM

Jumping naked on the bed
brown legs sturdy
potato chips clutched
and crisply flying
crunching
   graceful
     soaring dance

Jumping naked on the bed
grainy salty bed of chips
glee abandoned
childhood rapture
curls hopping
legs hop-scotching

Jumping naked on the bed
giggles and brown eyes
evening coming
jumped the sky to dark
you did
lit
  with lithesome
childhood glee

Time delights in
captured moment
loving eyes can see
though blinded
down these naked
years without you

Jumping naked on the bed

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In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)

[This message has been edited by Martie (edited 02-20-2000).]

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2000-02-20 08:43 PM

Hi little Mommie~
A great big hug to you, love.
Oh, Martie ... it has to be so difficult.
Cherish these lovely memories of Michelle
even though they have to bring tears.
Someday, the smiles will outnumber the tears.
God be with you, my friend.
I love you.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2000-02-20 08:55 PM

Martie,
A wonderful piece of writing. *L*

Breathe~
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since 2000-02-05

Posts 315
Washington...

3 posted 2000-02-20 09:05 PM

I have to admit...the title caught my eye...I don't know what I expected and quite honestly surprised by the content...I am truly sorry for your loss...but this simply enchanting...

Wonderful portrayal...

Freedom of expression is the watch word...

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2000-02-20 09:44 PM

Marge--Thank you for your abundance of love.

Sy--I think you're wonderful

Breathe--I know, the title is a little titillating, but thanks for reading and for your sweet reply.

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

5 posted 2000-02-20 10:10 PM

Exquisite, Martie. The little rememberances are always the sweetest.

CMGrimm
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since 2000-02-14

Posts 685
USA

6 posted 2000-02-20 10:12 PM

I love this one Martie...very touching portrait you've painted here...

Chris

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