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playing with language

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Chris Goodman
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Issaquah, Washington usa


0 posted 02-20-2000 06:34 PM       View Profile for Chris Goodman   Email Chris Goodman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chris Goodman

The moon
Bright  & far
Glows and hangs,
Gently
Flashlight.

A flower,
Red and jumping
Soothes and comforts,
Peacefully
Excitement.

A duck
Loud & quick,
Swimming & flying,
Crazily
Fear.

The heart
thick & thin
pounding & screaming
happily
Love.


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INclan
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since 07-20-99
Posts 1046
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1 posted 02-20-2000 07:12 PM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

Chris,

I like this! Is this a recognized style or did you just make it up? From the material I usually post, you can tell I prefer a few words that say a lot. Nicely done.

INclan

Chris Goodman
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INclan,

Parts of speech poem is what I call it.  It helps me teach my daughter the parts of speech and to look for various parts.  It is simple & fun & can be challenging.  It usually starts with a, an, the and then goes to a noun.  I have the structure if you want it.  

Chris


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Well now - this is really interesting!  Bravo!  I really liked the simplicity in it!  Very original I must say....
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