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Days Unsung

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spiked
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0 posted 02-20-2000 06:09 PM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for spiked

Days unsung
Thoughts controlled
Feeling repressed
Unbound soul

No complaints
No ones to blame
Thinking in-depth
All is the same

Looking from inside
Heart to my eyes
Seeing things different
Limitless skies

Each moment is given
To get to the next
The time we are living
Is only a guess

For each path is taken
On a whim that we felt
No sure path before us
We take what were dealt

Donít look behind you
Thereís nothing to see
No changing whatís done
So let it be

Move forward in love
Feel safe and at home
Your love is the answer
To questions unborn.



[This message has been edited by spiked (edited 02-20-2000).]
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poetFemmeFatale
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1 posted 02-20-2000 07:15 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

This really touched something in me...So many of these little lines ring so true.  You really gave this one some thought.  I enjoyed it much - the 5th and 6th stanzas were amazing and powerful!  BANG!  You hit it right dead center....Bravo.
INclan
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2 posted 02-20-2000 07:18 PM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

Nicely written Spiked. I find myself unable to agree with certain of your assertions but that does not detract from a good poem. Keep up the good work.

INclan
Chris Goodman
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3 posted 02-20-2000 08:14 PM       View Profile for Chris Goodman   Email Chris Goodman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chris Goodman

I have to agree with INclan, some of the stuff I don't agree with, but well-written & easy on the eyes.  
Chris

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serenity blaze
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4 posted 02-20-2000 08:29 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Sounds like you are writing from a happier
place these days--how I wish I could relate
to this...but I am happy for you, tho.  Nice.
spiked
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5 posted 02-20-2000 11:34 PM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

Not sure where this one came from wrote it this morning.
Not sure I fully agree with what I wrote myself, but somethings aren't written but write themselves. Thanks for the support and serenity not everything is always as dark or as light as we think. Keep your chin up.
 
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