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Open Poetry #6

Groundhog Day (Haiku)

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

0 posted 2000-02-20 05:31 PM

Earth in cold embrace
The ground rat saw his shadow
Jake is 10 today

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

1 posted 2000-02-20 06:27 PM

Very good ! I know how hard it is to write Haiku. Very hard !!

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

2 posted 2000-02-20 07:09 PM

Thank you, Munda. I enjoy the style and the challange. I also like to add a little variety to the poetry posted.

INclan

Chris Goodman
Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 92
Issaquah, Washington usa

3 posted 2000-02-20 07:28 PM

INclan,

Okay my turn...what style exactly is that & what is the structure? Let me know I am up for a challenge. P.S. I liked it!

Chris

Blue Moon

Chris Goodman
Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 92
Issaquah, Washington usa

4 posted 2000-02-20 07:28 PM

INclan,

Okay my turn...what style exactly is that & what is the structure? Let me know I am up for a challenge. P.S. I liked it!

Chris

Blue Moon

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