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Sand between her toes

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Breathe~
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0 posted 02-20-2000 02:55 PM       View Profile for Breathe~   Email Breathe~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Breathe~

He's gone for the weekend
beach strolling
He loves the feel of sand
between his toes
peace of the rolling waves
under the moonlight
Said he would look at the moon
and think of her...

Would she of him?

Standing on her front porch
Lunar kisses light
upon her upturned face
as she searches the skies
An endless blanket of ebony velvet
elegantly patterned with heavens souls
shimmering soft whispers
She surrenders to the gentle night
dreaming of a distant moon
Floating away for a wistful moment
she joins him
and feels the sand between her toes…..




 Freedom of expression is the watch word...

© Copyright 2000 Denise Blackwell - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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1 posted 02-20-2000 03:11 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

this is perfect...lovely imagery...
very enjoyable to read...well expressed emotions.
take care, janet marie

 Now for me some words come easy...
But I know that they don't mean that much
Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch.
You never knew what I loved in you--
I don't know what you loved in me...
Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be...
How long have I been sleeping-
How long have I been drifting alone through the night...
How long have I've dreaming I could make it right...
If I closed my eyes and tried with all my might
To be the one you need...
Jackson Browne


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2 posted 02-20-2000 03:16 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Breathe~

Hey there gal !
This is exquisitely LOVELY !
You are 'feeling' your writing.
Way to go.  I like this the bestest
out of all of your pieces SO FAR !
~*Marge*~
  


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Breathe~
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3 posted 02-20-2000 08:58 PM       View Profile for Breathe~   Email Breathe~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Breathe~

Janet Marie...

Thank you very much... )  

Marge...

I'm on new ground here...I started writing less than a year ago...with heartbreak as my only inspiration...then fantasies of what I wanted...

So I'm plodding along...(mostly posting old poems )..while I expand into new territories..

Thanks so much for your encouragement!  *HUG*


 Freedom of expression is the watch word...

Martie
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4 posted 02-20-2000 09:10 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Just lovely, the imagery, the longing-- well done.
Lost Dreamer
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5 posted 02-20-2000 09:39 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

The warm soft sands
caressing my soul.
The oceans tides
washing away residue.
Nature's cleansing
rebirth from above.

I love your poem, it inspired me deeply, thank you for sharing it here for my eyes to delight, my senses to feel, and my mind to encounter a beautiful journey.
bobbycat
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6 posted 02-20-2000 09:58 PM       View Profile for bobbycat   Email bobbycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bobbycat

Very beautiful....I can just imagine myself at that beach with your words....great job!  

Bobbycat =^..^=


 ~~Blessed Be!~~
CMGrimm
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7 posted 02-20-2000 10:05 PM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

Oh gosh....I just love the feeling of walking alone on a beach just as the tide settles back...leaving only my own footprints behind me, like a trail of lonely memories only to be washed away by the next tide to make a new slate for the next lonely dreamer to make his tracks.....


Thanks for a truly lovely read...

Chris


 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.
Alwye
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In the space between moments


8 posted 02-20-2000 10:24 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

So romantic and lovely, Breathe.  I could picture the silver sands and the bright moon wonderfully.  Thank you for the lovely read.  

 *Krista Knutson*

"Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~

Breathe~
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9 posted 02-21-2000 05:03 AM       View Profile for Breathe~   Email Breathe~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Breathe~

Thank you Martie... )

Lost Dreamer...what lovely words!  "Nature's cleansing rebirth from above"...Thank you... )

Heya bobbycat!....   I wish I was at the beach right now with some sand between my toes...*grin*

Chris...and thank you...for a truly lovely reply... )

Alwye...silvery sands...*sigh*  What a wonderful vision...Thank you... )


 I love the time
and in between
the calm inside me
in the space
where I can breathe...

Sarah McLachlan
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10 posted 02-21-2000 05:57 AM       View Profile for Glorfindel   Email Glorfindel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Glorfindel

Wow, that is sooo cool.Wouldn't it be nice to have that kind of connection with somebody?
I really enjoyed reading this.



 Let winds rage, seas boil and years curse,
My love shal live everyoung in my verse.
 
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