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whiskey
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0 posted 2000-02-20 10:23 AM


Deep in the shadow you wait there for me
Watching me sleeping feeling my dreams
Not even knowing of what I am seeing
Admirering me from a far my being
My dream master keeping me safe
As along I sleep awaiting awake
In the morn you'll be gone
Sun inflood the dawn
Dividing the night into day
Off to your land to sleep await
Then dusk its upon the sky
As day is lost into darkness
You arise to stand and watch
As to sleep my eyes flood

© Copyright 2000 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-02-20 06:49 PM


Whiskey~
Lovely.  Just lovely.
No way is this gonna lay on a back page !
Here you go ..... to the top !
Love it.
Love you, gal.
~*Marge*~


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Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2000-02-20 06:56 PM


Whiskey,
Where have you been? Enjoyed the poem.

whiskey
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3 posted 2000-02-20 07:45 PM


Thanks for the replies, I have been helping out a friend of mine that just had a baby at 25 weeks , so not alot of time to get online to post I am very sorry to have missed all the wonderful poems I have alot of reading to catch up on  
Severn
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4 posted 2000-02-21 05:33 PM


Nice to see you back Whiskey!

Sun inflood the dawn

Love that line! You have excellent word usage here. Hope your friend is doing ok.

K


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life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath

Janet Marie
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5 posted 2000-02-21 08:05 PM


this is perfect...so full of imagery and vision.. a great read!!
take care, janet marie

 I love you
Is all that you can't say-
Years gone by and still...
Words don't come easily
Like I love you, I love you...
But you can say baby...
Baby can I hold you tonight
Maybe if I told you the right words
At the right time you'd be mine...
Tracy Chapman



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