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Deep in the shadow you wait there for me
Watching me sleeping feeling my dreams
Not even knowing of what I am seeing
Admirering me from a far my being
My dream master keeping me safe
As along I sleep awaiting awake
In the morn you'll be gone
Sun inflood the dawn
Dividing the night into day
Off to your land to sleep await
Then dusk its upon the sky
As day is lost into darkness
You arise to stand and watch
As to sleep my eyes flood
© Copyright 2000 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 02-20-2000 06:49 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Whiskey~
Lovely.  Just lovely.
No way is this gonna lay on a back page !
Here you go ..... to the top !
Love it.
Love you, gal.
~*Marge*~


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Whiskey,
Where have you been? Enjoyed the poem.
whiskey
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3 posted 02-20-2000 07:45 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Thanks for the replies, I have been helping out a friend of mine that just had a baby at 25 weeks , so not alot of time to get online to post I am very sorry to have missed all the wonderful poems I have alot of reading to catch up on  
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4 posted 02-21-2000 05:33 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Nice to see you back Whiskey!

Sun inflood the dawn

Love that line! You have excellent word usage here. Hope your friend is doing ok.

K


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life enriches writing'
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5 posted 02-21-2000 08:05 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

this is perfect...so full of imagery and vision.. a great read!!
take care, janet marie

 I love you
Is all that you can't say-
Years gone by and still...
Words don't come easily
Like I love you, I love you...
But you can say baby...
Baby can I hold you tonight
Maybe if I told you the right words
At the right time you'd be mine...
Tracy Chapman


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