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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Expunge that which with heavy hand Lay across this fertile land Obscure remembrances exist From time distilled as drops of mist On fields of green grass memories Dispelled as light warms morning breeze I seek for greater clarity And pluck one blade from emerald sea Inhale the scent of pre-dawn air Transcend this plane of mortal cares Prismatic orbs refract sun's light An instant then are gone from sight Leaving but a piece of grass And just another horse's a** |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Enchanting verse, surprising ending.  Claire |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Good poem, Doc - It works well - even without the horse...  |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
You had me mesmorized through this poem, and then I felt I got hit in the head with a bat when I reached the conclusion. Maybe your intention, but my head hurts now...LOL [This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 02-20-2000).] |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
M.M.,Nan,L.D., Well if I knew how they were going to turn out , they wouldn't be as much fun to write. Oh and L.D. , sorry about your head ! Doc [This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (edited 02-21-2000).] |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautifully written and fun. What more could anyone ask for. |
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