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Lost Dreamer
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0 posted 02-20-2000 08:22 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Soldiers Signature

Mysterious Haze
a glimmer of hope
remembering days
he couldn't cope.

Long roads
winding paths
enemy codes
returning wrath's.

Friend forever
dying pact
give up never
live the fact.

Eyes in heaven
reaching down
kissing Devon
removing frown.

Yesterday's battle
tomorrow's future
mind brittle
soldier's signature.
© Copyright 2000 RiaL - All Rights Reserved
HelmutB
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1 posted 02-20-2000 08:37 AM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

Very nicely done, the signature is clear to see.

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

hoot_owl_rn
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You have said a great deal in this one Gloria...someday perhaps no more pacts will be needed
Meadowmuse
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I like your style here, Lost Dreamer. You've a powerful message in this simplistic (but not simple) and well delivered poem.
Lost Dreamer
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4 posted 02-20-2000 11:33 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

HelmutB: Thank You for your kind reply

Ruth: Thank You, we can only hope for that one day.

Meadowmuse: Thank You, I'm glad you liked it.

Munda
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5 posted 02-24-2000 06:37 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Gloria, I really like this one !  Maybe some more people should read it......up you go and I am off to bed   Good night !  
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This is great Gloria!!

Denise
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