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Soldier's Signature
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Soldier's Signature |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Soldiers Signature Mysterious Haze a glimmer of hope remembering days he couldn't cope. Long roads winding paths enemy codes returning wrath's. Friend forever dying pact give up never live the fact. Eyes in heaven reaching down kissing Devon removing frown. Yesterday's battle tomorrow's future mind brittle soldier's signature. |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Very nicely done, the signature is clear to see. The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
You have said a great deal in this one Gloria...someday perhaps no more pacts will be needed  |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
I like your style here, Lost Dreamer. You've a powerful message in this simplistic (but not simple) and well delivered poem. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
HelmutB: Thank You for your kind reply Ruth: Thank You, we can only hope for that one day. Meadowmuse: Thank You, I'm glad you liked it. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Gloria, I really like this one ! Maybe some more people should read it......up you go and I am off to bed  Good night ! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is great Gloria!! Denise |
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