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Chris Goodman Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 92Issaquah, Washington usa |
I walk in your shadow casted away by fallen light that only has room for one I dance to moonlight and hold a tune till midnight and still walk while dancing in shadows of you when i try to find my way i turn another page and read those lines i have have read one hundred times again the release is slow and painful but the shadow soon fades with you beside my only side and finally I have a face a name can also give me strength the strength that has become me to find myself once again is somewhat of a miracle i lost touch with the ones i loved to the shadow that is dying but you'll see friend i will come again with a face and a smile that will be smiling. Blue Moon |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Chris, I read this posting with interest but found it hard to follow. Was this intentional? Poets are indee passionate people....riding the lows as well as the highs. INclan |
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Chris Goodman Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 92Issaquah, Washington usa |
I think it was midnight or something when I wrote this one & Phoebe. I was drinking a little wine & I don't think it was intentional to get "u" lost. After waking up it is hard follow isn't it. Anyway, not my best free verse neither is Phoebe. Phoebe is true life.. Chris Blue Moon |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Well, maybe I am still sleeping cause as I read this out load to myself I thought it was just fine, and I really liked the way you took me through this journey, anyway maybe I'll wake up tonight. |
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Chris Goodman Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 92Issaquah, Washington usa |
Lost Dreamer, thanks! Chris Blue Moon |
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