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Phoebe

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Chris Goodman
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since 01-28-2000
Posts 95
Issaquah, Washington usa


0 posted 02-20-2000 02:44 AM       View Profile for Chris Goodman   Email Chris Goodman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chris Goodman

Has it been ten years
& six months?
the last thing I remember
was the suitcase in your
trunk!
the man who sat at the
wheel to take you
to the beach
i never heard another
word
it left me
in mystery
i called months later
to see how you were
a friend of mine indeed
but when you spoke
you cloaked the
the truth and the
words came out so easily
to never ring your name
again would be something
of a wish, but the thought
of you is forever in head
and something to get use to
i will leave you alone
but only in that person
to sit and drink by
myself is something of
rehearsal
i never said that things die slow
i only said i cared
but life to you
is just a joke
so go away my dear
it has been long
it has been free
it has been misery
to find myself upon your stairs
and laughing about
so hysterically
i drank and smoked
while you blasted the twins
i cut into two
with the song of rememberance
please tell me you are over it
now
forgive your friend
find a way how
doing you wrong with all my lies
i escaped the hell hole
for something worse
something on the inside
it will take a razor to leave
a lifetime to heal
and not another friend
will ever replace the faith I have in Phoebe.

 Blue Moon


[This message has been edited by Chris Goodman (edited 02-20-2000).]
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INclan
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since 07-20-99
Posts 1046
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1 posted 02-20-2000 08:06 AM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

Chris,
an interesting composition...true life?  I suspect that each of us carries a little of a Phoebe around with us.

INclan
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley


2 posted 03-09-2000 02:12 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

TGTBATB

Too
Good
To
Be
At
The
Bottom


Miss.Queeny
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since 02-26-2000
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3 posted 03-09-2000 02:17 PM       View Profile for Miss.Queeny   Email Miss.Queeny   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Miss.Queeny

Very nice. And very truthful ? Probably. The title really caught my name.
Keep up the good work...

Love, Peace and Apathy...MISS.Q xxx
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