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Compgirl
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0 posted 2000-02-20 12:22 PM


God has a way of making all things right
so when I write this poem, I have you in sight.
I need to spend no time on these words
easily they come, just feelings unheard.
He guided to me you when I needed a friend
no judgement, no feelings that I had to pretend.
You talk, you listen, you love me for me
never the hesitation when he called you to see.
I share with you part of my soul
my feelings and fears you seem to uphold.
You caress my heart with love and grace
true friendship unfolding in the presence of your face.
When I am confused or overwelmed
you give me yourself, never letting me down.
I find it hard to say the feelings that I feel
today I want you to know this love I feel is real.
You brighten my day with your words, your smile I can't erase
your thoughts, your style, your grace.
I need you to know that my friendship is true
my heart, my love, in every thought of you.


 

© Copyright 2000 Patty Lynn - All Rights Reserved
Parker
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1 posted 2000-02-20 12:27 PM


Welcome to Passions Compgirl, a very beautiful and careing post. Look forward to seeing more from you.

Parker

bsquirrel
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2 posted 2000-02-20 12:39 PM


It's like you say, you don't need to pause to think of words, they just bloom out of you like wildflowers. Great poem.

Mike

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3 posted 2000-02-20 12:45 PM


What a lovely tribute to your friend, welcome to our family! Please check your email for a special welcome.  

CMGrimm
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4 posted 2000-02-20 12:49 PM


Welcome to passions, I hope to read more from you in the future.

Chris

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.

Eloise
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5 posted 2000-02-20 12:52 PM


Very lovely poem.  Looking forward to reading more.  Welcome to Passions.  
Compgirl
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6 posted 2000-02-20 12:59 PM


I thank you all for your reply. I have never felt such a warm welcome through a computer in all my life.   I look forward to knowing and reading the work of you all.

jascanvey
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7 posted 2000-02-20 01:55 PM


Welcome to the family!!
A lovely tribute to a close friend, I enjoyed reading your first post!  

Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2000-02-20 03:11 PM


CompGirl~

to our family.  
With an entrance as lovely as this one,
we will hope to see more.
Lovely thoughts.
~*Marge*~





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Songbird
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9 posted 2000-02-20 10:53 PM


Very nice writing there, hope to see more from you around here.
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