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Compgirl
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0 posted 02-20-2000 12:22 AM       View Profile for Compgirl   Email Compgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Compgirl

God has a way of making all things right
so when I write this poem, I have you in sight.
I need to spend no time on these words
easily they come, just feelings unheard.
He guided to me you when I needed a friend
no judgement, no feelings that I had to pretend.
You talk, you listen, you love me for me
never the hesitation when he called you to see.
I share with you part of my soul
my feelings and fears you seem to uphold.
You caress my heart with love and grace
true friendship unfolding in the presence of your face.
When I am confused or overwelmed
you give me yourself, never letting me down.
I find it hard to say the feelings that I feel
today I want you to know this love I feel is real.
You brighten my day with your words, your smile I can't erase
your thoughts, your style, your grace.
I need you to know that my friendship is true
my heart, my love, in every thought of you.


 
© Copyright 2000 Patty Lynn - All Rights Reserved
Parker
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since 01-06-2000
Posts 3135
... the old black rum


1 posted 02-20-2000 12:27 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Welcome to Passions Compgirl, a very beautiful and careing post. Look forward to seeing more from you.

Parker
bsquirrel
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2 posted 02-20-2000 12:39 AM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

It's like you say, you don't need to pause to think of words, they just bloom out of you like wildflowers. Great poem.

Mike
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley


3 posted 02-20-2000 12:45 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

What a lovely tribute to your friend, welcome to our family! Please check your email for a special welcome.  
CMGrimm
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since 02-14-2000
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4 posted 02-20-2000 12:49 AM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

Welcome to passions, I hope to read more from you in the future.

Chris

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.
Eloise
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since 11-27-1999
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5 posted 02-20-2000 12:52 AM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

Very lovely poem.  Looking forward to reading more.  Welcome to Passions.  
Compgirl
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6 posted 02-20-2000 12:59 AM       View Profile for Compgirl   Email Compgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Compgirl

I thank you all for your reply. I have never felt such a warm welcome through a computer in all my life.   I look forward to knowing and reading the work of you all.
jascanvey
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England


7 posted 02-20-2000 01:55 PM       View Profile for jascanvey   Email jascanvey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jascanvey

Welcome to the family!!
A lovely tribute to a close friend, I enjoyed reading your first post!  
Marge Tindal
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8 posted 02-20-2000 03:11 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

CompGirl~

to our family.  
With an entrance as lovely as this one,
we will hope to see more.
Lovely thoughts.
~*Marge*~





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Songbird
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since 12-15-1999
Posts 2211
California


9 posted 02-20-2000 10:53 PM       View Profile for Songbird   Email Songbird   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Songbird's Home Page   View IP for Songbird

Very nice writing there, hope to see more from you around here.
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