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Songbird
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since 12-15-1999
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0 posted 02-19-2000 11:39 PM       View Profile for Songbird   Email Songbird   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Songbird's Home Page   View IP for Songbird

I am not yelling
Don't tell me I'm screaming
If you would just listen
To what I am saying
I would not have to
Exaggerate my point!

Now do you read me
Loud and clear?
OR
Do you want me
To Yell
It
Right
In
YOUR
EAR!

!!

© Copyright 2000 Marcia Estep - All Rights Reserved
doreen peri
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since 05-25-99
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1 posted 02-20-2000 12:03 AM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

OUCH! Got my attention.... geez.... who could ignore this plea? Now, you gonna write the poem about what's really on  your mind? hehe...

Thanks for an interesting read... I absolutely LOVE free verse... this one was very deliberate and forceful. Nice job.
Parker
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2 posted 02-20-2000 12:19 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Keep it down in here, heard ya screaming in adults. Great poem.

Parker
Compgirl
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3 posted 02-20-2000 12:29 AM       View Profile for Compgirl   Email Compgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Compgirl

I have felt that way a few times but in all kindness it is better to keep in on paper. Cute poem.  
Nan
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4 posted 02-20-2000 11:27 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

What
          Did
        You
Say

?





[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 02-20-2000).]
Janet Marie
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5 posted 02-20-2000 01:25 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

haha...great poem septsong...very creative...
its always good to keep a sense of humor about it all...and Nans reply did just that as well...good job!
take care, janet marie
Songbird
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6 posted 02-20-2000 05:01 PM       View Profile for Songbird   Email Songbird   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Songbird's Home Page   View IP for Songbird

Believe me I am laughing! I just wrote this poem as the thoughts came to me last night, when my teenager was just being a teenager! As usual not listening! I told her just look what you caused me to do, I wrote a poem, unintentionally!
 
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