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Lost Dreamer
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0 posted 2000-02-19 03:39 PM


The Hues That Captivate

My sense of vision seeks you out
the hues that captivate my senses.
You entrance me
with your magnetic linking gaze
You impassion me
with your gentle encompassing gleam
You dazzle me
with your intriguing knowledgeable glow

Let me read your life
through soft honest glimses.
Let me find your sincerity
through caressingly tender glances
Let me see into your soul
through intensely caring glares.
Let me give you all of me
through your mesmerizing magical grace.


[This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 02-19-2000).]

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Denise
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1 posted 2000-02-19 04:03 PM


Beautiful hues, Gloria! The eyes are truly the window of the soul! This is lovely!  

Denise

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2 posted 2000-02-19 06:29 PM


This is really different! I like this a lot. Your use of words is wonderful...'magnetic linking gaze'...very nice....  

Lost Dreamer
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3 posted 2000-02-19 09:09 PM


Denise: Thank You, eyes say it all, in so many ways.

Sharon: Thank You very much, this one took some playing with for it to feel right.

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4 posted 2000-02-19 09:26 PM


Gloria~
Well, you 'played' with it
JUST RIGHT !
I like it very much.
~*Marge*~


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Lost Dreamer
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5 posted 2000-02-19 10:13 PM


Marge: Thank You very much, glad you liked it.
hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 2000-02-20 09:45 AM


Oh, what wonderful hues of words your pen painted the paper with....excellent verse my friend  
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