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The Jackal
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0 posted 02-19-2000 01:23 PM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

shaking because theres nothing
left to hold on to this
believing for the season
my only reason
for not picking up this mess
sparing all the time
alone ..wishing you never were
a self imposed ripped apart
shadow of a diseased and desperate heart...


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Meadowmuse
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Bitterness so accurately portrayed...good read, Jackal.
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Good read indeed my friend

 "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

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Hi Jackal,

Yes we all have to endure periods of bitterness, but it is the first step back to happpiness.
I liked your poem.

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