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Who am I?

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Justin Tolerable
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since 02-19-2000
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0 posted 02-19-2000 12:26 PM       View Profile for Justin Tolerable   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Justin Tolerable

They say that I'm intolerable,
I really don't know why?
I am a very happy boy,
And am as sweet as pie.

My brothers left me in the lerch,
They even made me cry,
They told me I was immature,
I thought that I would die!

I only throw my little fits,
When I do not get my way,
If you don't give in to me,
Your really gonna pay.

I'll kick you in your shins so hard,
And hit you in the head.
I'll scream and yell and raise a fuss,
Can't send me to my bed.

I'll tear up all the things you love,
And spit and curse and flame.
Give me all the things I want,
Give in to this my game.

You'll love me much,
This I know.
Cause there is just one me.
Pet me on my ego or I will start my show.

Brothers dear, you love me,
How could you ever not?
Come and give me everything,
And tell me I am hot.

Hey guys, you don't have to worry or fear or miss me anymore. I am here and I am as wonderful as always!!
© Copyright 2000 Justin Tolerable - All Rights Reserved
Justine Uff
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since 10-17-1999
Posts 31


1 posted 02-19-2000 12:41 PM       View Profile for Justine Uff   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Justine Uff

Of brothers I have Justine Uff
Who needs another one?
You really sound absurdly gruff
What do you do for fun?

I sure could use a sister though
To help me deal with all.
It seems there's more than Just-a-Few
Answering Justin's call....

Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 08-22-99
Posts 23002


2 posted 02-19-2000 02:33 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I think you're just a lonely soul
Who never knew much love
Demanding, though, can't be your goal
This flame and rant and shove.

Try kindess, dear, and then you'll see
Perhaps they'll come around
To be the brothers they can be
Through words of lovely sound!

Cute poems, J.T and J.U.!  

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 11-16-1999
Posts 31622
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA


3 posted 02-19-2000 03:34 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Yes indeed, you sound very intolerable.   Very nice job on this poem.  I liked it.  James
Nurse Crachet
Member
since 09-27-1999
Posts 321
They know where I am!


4 posted 02-19-2000 06:12 PM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

Justin, we need you in the marathon right away, there will be prizes for the best dancers.
Justin Thyme
Member
since 09-13-99
Posts 228
Oz


5 posted 02-19-2000 11:00 PM       View Profile for Justin Thyme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Justin Thyme

Hey, brother J. what do you say?
Are you still complaining?
When we were kids on sunny days,
you'd cry 'cause it ain't raining!

You were a pain most every Thyme
when choosing sides for socker.
And at the gym, you pitched a fit
when someone slammed your locker.

Now Mamma liked you Justin Uff
to name you like a Justin,
but you still whined and bellyached
and said, "Please call me Dustin."

It's nice to see you here, my bro'.
I'm glad you're here at Passions.
But spare us, please, your sorry tales
of childhood's meager rations.

At least you are out on the street,
not in an institution.
Unless you're at the 'stute with us (?)
If so, let's Revolution!

We'd like to break out from this joint
and crack the door, unlatch it!
So, quit your whining, little bro'
and let's duck out by Cratchet!

She's at some silly prom, I hear,
just dancin' like all get out!
So quit the bitchin', bro' of mine,
Let's BOLT! Let's jet! Let's set out!

sincerely yours,

Justin Thyme
aka Leonardo DaVinci
Artiste Extraordiniare

    
Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 05-20-99
Posts 24426
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA


6 posted 02-19-2000 11:27 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Who are these people Justin Vading this forum all the Thyme?...
Chris Goodman
Member
since 01-28-2000
Posts 95
Issaquah, Washington usa


7 posted 02-20-2000 02:08 AM       View Profile for Chris Goodman   Email Chris Goodman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chris Goodman

This poem that takes me back
to the coffee shop this morning
a little boy held the doors
wouldn't let me in
he had the gull to hit my stomach
and kick me in my shin
when I finally had enough
strength to open up the doors
the little kid I'll call Justin
kicked and hit once more
I fought him off as I ran to the counter
to tell the store owner about his manner
they quickly knew of his sort and pointed
to his mother
I told her about her son
she seemed to shrug it off
I got into my car and slowly drove
back home with two bruised shins and
coffee for two and a nasty taste I will just call Justin.
P.S.  This is a true story from this a.m.


 Blue Moon


[This message has been edited by Chris Goodman (edited 02-20-2000).]
Nan
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since 05-20-99
Posts 24426
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA


8 posted 02-20-2000 11:51 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

ROTFLMDO....

I've been tutoring a 10 yr-old Justin - He's about 5'6" and at least 300 lbs... He refused to work on math and threatened to slug me.... True story...
 
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