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Justin Tolerable Junior Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 13 |
They say that I'm intolerable, I really don't know why? I am a very happy boy, And am as sweet as pie. My brothers left me in the lerch, They even made me cry, They told me I was immature, I thought that I would die! I only throw my little fits, When I do not get my way, If you don't give in to me, Your really gonna pay. I'll kick you in your shins so hard, And hit you in the head. I'll scream and yell and raise a fuss, Can't send me to my bed. I'll tear up all the things you love, And spit and curse and flame. Give me all the things I want, Give in to this my game. You'll love me much, This I know. Cause there is just one me. Pet me on my ego or I will start my show. Brothers dear, you love me, How could you ever not? Come and give me everything, And tell me I am hot. Hey guys, you don't have to worry or fear or miss me anymore. I am here and I am as wonderful as always!! |
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Justine Uff Junior Member
since 1999-10-17
Posts 27 |
Of brothers I have Justine Uff Who needs another one? You really sound absurdly gruff What do you do for fun? I sure could use a sister though To help me deal with all. It seems there's more than Just-a-Few Answering Justin's call.... |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I think you're just a lonely soul Who never knew much love Demanding, though, can't be your goal This flame and rant and shove. Try kindess, dear, and then you'll see Perhaps they'll come around To be the brothers they can be Through words of lovely sound! Cute poems, J.T and J.U.!  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes indeed, you sound very intolerable. Very nice job on this poem. I liked it. James |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
Justin, we need you in the marathon right away, there will be prizes for the best dancers. |
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Justin Thyme Member
since 1999-09-13
Posts 216Oz |
Hey, brother J. what do you say? Are you still complaining? When we were kids on sunny days, you'd cry 'cause it ain't raining! You were a pain most every Thyme when choosing sides for socker. And at the gym, you pitched a fit when someone slammed your locker. Now Mamma liked you Justin Uff to name you like a Justin, but you still whined and bellyached and said, "Please call me Dustin." It's nice to see you here, my bro'. I'm glad you're here at Passions. But spare us, please, your sorry tales of childhood's meager rations. At least you are out on the street, not in an institution. Unless you're at the 'stute with us (?) If so, let's Revolution! We'd like to break out from this joint and crack the door, unlatch it! So, quit your whining, little bro' and let's duck out by Cratchet! She's at some silly prom, I hear, just dancin' like all get out! So quit the bitchin', bro' of mine, Let's BOLT! Let's jet! Let's set out! sincerely yours, Justin Thyme aka Leonardo DaVinci Artiste Extraordiniare |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Who are these people Justin Vading this forum all the Thyme?...  |
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Chris Goodman Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 92Issaquah, Washington usa |
This poem that takes me back to the coffee shop this morning a little boy held the doors wouldn't let me in he had the gull to hit my stomach and kick me in my shin when I finally had enough strength to open up the doors the little kid I'll call Justin kicked and hit once more I fought him off as I ran to the counter to tell the store owner about his manner they quickly knew of his sort and pointed to his mother I told her about her son she seemed to shrug it off I got into my car and slowly drove back home with two bruised shins and coffee for two and a nasty taste I will just call Justin. P.S. This is a true story from this a.m. < !signature--> Blue Moon [This message has been edited by Chris Goodman (edited 02-20-2000).] |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
ROTFLMDO.... I've been tutoring a 10 yr-old Justin - He's about 5'6" and at least 300 lbs... He refused to work on math and threatened to slug me.... True story...  |
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