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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Because ~*Marge Tindal*~ I'll love you forever. I'll call out your name. Because I want to. I'll go on loving you. I'll wish you well. Because I want to. I'll keep your memory in my heart. I'll always love you more. Because I want to. I'll let you go. I'll set you free. Because I have to. I'll watch you walk away. I'll cry at your leaving. Because I have to. I'll be here if you return, because I want to. I'll accept if you do not, because I have to. I'll cry when you do not. Because, just because. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
I love this one Marge....just because. Thanks for the wonderful read Chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ChrisG~ And I like your response Because ... well, ... just because it's YOU ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Wow, I'm gonna go back and read this one again. Different, I like it "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
This is so lovely, Marge! Corinne |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Saxoness~ Thanks. So glad you are finding it different. Enjoy ! Corinne~ Thank you. Coming from you, I take that personally.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Sometimes "because" is reason enough without explanation. Can be a very big and important word, I think. Marge, how are the cosmos today???? Danny |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge, I think you got it together on the love thing...you know just what to do...Loved your poem, of course, because I want to, because you wrote it, and...just because. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
I love this one Marge, just because..it's different, just because I want to and ...just because |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Marge, how neat this is...familiar feelings, too. Claire |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
...and such is life - Nicely done, Marge..  |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Who said I walk away I'm here Nice piece you did Marge Well done The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Danny~ COSMOS be fine ! Yeah, Mom always said, "Because I said so." Good enough for me. Martie~ You are my friend, JUST BECAUSE! Eloise~ Just because I like your reply.Claire~ Familiar is good ! Nan~ Yeah, thanks. Helmut~ LOVE to you ! My heart would find you ! ! ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Lovely poem,Marge.: |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VanDana~ What a sweetheart you are to let me know. I had to work today so tonight I'll be able to catch up on my reading and replying. Thanks. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You fill my heart with so much joy It never seems to pause And fill my starless nights with love Why do you? Just because.... Your poems are presents come my way You are my Santa Clause And every day is Christmas day Why is it? Just because.... My heart is like a minnow small Trapped in your shark-like jaws Surviving only by your whim Why is that? Just because... I feel no sense of right or wrong You dispel Nature's laws My only need is your desire The reason? Just because..... I feel the flushness in my cheeks (Do men get menopause?) These things and more you do to me My poet.....just because.... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
My Balladeer~ You have my heart, you have my admiration. You stir me with desire and there's no pause or hesitation. Just because you do the very things you say and fill my day and night with your tender ways. The flush upon your cheek must surely be the warmth that I also feel just because of thee. Love you ~*Marge*~< !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 02-19-2000).] |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Aw, shucks.....    |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ This is wonderful, at a time when I'm trying to let go and hold on at the same time, this feels so good. Like it was just for me! hehehe  Loved it! -SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer~ LOL ! SEA~ Well, I knew it was for somebody ... the thoughts usually come from the very spirit who needs the words. HUGS ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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