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An ending? A begining?

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Glorfindel
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since 02-17-2000
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Auckland, New Zealand


0 posted 02-19-2000 08:59 AM       View Profile for Glorfindel   Email Glorfindel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Glorfindel

So when was the ending?
It never came but once I swear.
Immensly small and intrinsically vague,
it gets nothing from me.

All in black and white,
paradox of coinhabitance,
creeping sandy mayhem,
under my locked front door.

Understandable?ha...
It lives in ambiguity,
with no thought in no mind,
a rational wave of chaos.

Lifted up you are,
the sky plowed by euphoria....
then below is up, the always ending,
eyes smarting from the grounds slap.

But pay it no heed, if you dare,
impartial as uncaring,
the sand owns more sympathy,
holding you, crying...

Take heed, a deed done,
a memory of one
more horrible, long gone,
to another lost soul.

A handful grab and stand,
stinking, soaking, singing, smiling,
A wide stride to the edge,
to cry...once...more.


 Let winds rage, seas boil and years curse,
My love shal live everyoung in my verse.
© Copyright 2000 John Steemson - All Rights Reserved
Cerenity
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since 02-16-2000
Posts 2712
Escondido-California


1 posted 02-20-2000 12:40 PM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi there Glorfindel.

I'm not sure but are you speaking of an end relationship? One you would like to think is not worth crying over, but find it hurts you more than you would like???

I did like this poem anyway no matter if my reply is wrong. Welcome to Passions

Cerenity-1
 
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