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Chris Goodman
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0 posted 02-19-2000 12:43 AM       View Profile for Chris Goodman   Email Chris Goodman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chris Goodman

Come over here and touch the inside
Of me with your moist hot tongue
This is the desire that
Digs on you
& the warnings that
send me through
roof and cloud
that tumble like
weeds
blow out candles
with surefire breeze
your truth fades into a lie
a dizzy daze
and now all too lost within your maze
I feel crazed and silenced at the very
Same time
My lips are wrapped like pig and swine
I crave the attention
Like that cat on the tin
You are leaving with
My blisters still breathing
And yearning
For yet another sting
From the bee
A pot full of honey is what I mean
A pot full of gold is what they seen
When the light is not good
& the smell is fear
The night turns to daylight
With the crash of a tear




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serenity blaze
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1 posted 02-19-2000 04:35 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Lots of good stuff here...many great visuals...enjoyed, much thanks...
JamesMichael
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2 posted 02-19-2000 07:12 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

The first two lines got me thinking about my friend Ann.   Lovely poem.   James
Corinne
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state of confusion


3 posted 02-19-2000 10:36 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Whoa!  Hot stuff!

Corinne
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4 posted 02-19-2000 10:42 AM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

Wow killer poem! Loved the last two lines

 "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

Parker
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... the old black rum


5 posted 02-19-2000 06:51 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Chris, enthralling, really loved the way it came together.

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6 posted 02-19-2000 10:27 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

I like your rhythm here, Chris. Good reading. (o:
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