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Chris Goodman
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Fuzzy bending over now
The smell of things I canít place
From yesterday
Bending over you now
Can you take off this wool
Reveal whatís real
What you can now not see
I spoke to you
I spoke of you
& now what I have
is someone I created upon you
This is something
I must do alone now
Iíll take him with me
Just to be warned now
In the distance I will forget now
And remember I forgot how


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Hi Chris,

Some times I think it is better to leave the wool on some people, and to forget is some times better right from the start.

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Chris Goodman
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Hi Cerenity,

I can never leave someone alone.  Anotherwards, if I fall for someone (friend or lover) I must always dig to a deeper level.  I am usually rewarded for my efforts, but I usually forget why I started.
Chris

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