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Chris Goodman
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since 2000-01-28
Posts 92
Issaquah, Washington usa

0 posted 2000-02-19 12:30 PM



Fuzzy bending over now
The smell of things I can’t place
From yesterday
Bending over you now
Can you take off this wool
Reveal what’s real
What you can now not see
I spoke to you
I spoke of you
& now what I have
is someone I created upon you
This is something
I must do alone now
I’ll take him with me
Just to be warned now
In the distance I will forget now
And remember I forgot how


 Blue Moon

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Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
1 posted 2000-02-20 02:11 PM


Hi Chris,

Some times I think it is better to leave the wool on some people, and to forget is some times better right from the start.

Cerenity-1

Chris Goodman
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since 2000-01-28
Posts 92
Issaquah, Washington usa
2 posted 2000-02-20 02:22 PM


Hi Cerenity,

I can never leave someone alone.  Anotherwards, if I fall for someone (friend or lover) I must always dig to a deeper level.  I am usually rewarded for my efforts, but I usually forget why I started.
Chris

 Blue Moon

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