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Stepping Stones |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
You know that I loved you, once upon a time. Back when your heart blended with mine. But things changed right before our eyes. Which once again shifted the course of our lives. There was good reason for this to occur. But at the time, I wasn't so sure. I wandered restless, all alone. Until one day my heart found its way home. Once yesterday's memories faded into gray. And the cobwebs in my mind were swept away. My eyes were opened once again. And I realized this was not the end. Every step along the way is just a stepping stone. Another chaper in our book to call our very own. When each lesson learned is said and done, It molds us into what we eventually become. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
This is beautiful, and so very true. |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
The things we feel can be said in so many different ways, and you have expressed it so well! I look forward to searching for more of your enlightening words. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Yes, the insignificant steps make the significant whole. Great theme and nicely done Liz |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Lost Dreamer, sonjes, and Liz that you all for reading and commenting with such kind words. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
APPLAUDS!!!!,/b> oh how true your words ring and what a beautiful song they sing. How each step of our life makes us who we are and we have no choice but to take it one step at a time. Wonderful work Eloise  |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Truer words were never spoken. Lovely! Corinne |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Ruth and Corrine, thank you both so very much. I guess that's all we can do is live just one step at a time. Hang in there Ruth, we are all stepping with you. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Eloise, much truth and wisdom, well expressed. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Eloise. Wisdom gained through pain will be well heeded, I think. Well done! Denise |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely Eloise. Every ending is only the start of a new beginning. In between we figure out how to let go. James |
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