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sonjes
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0 posted 02-18-2000 11:42 PM       View Profile for sonjes   Email sonjes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for sonjes

Liberate me from the chains of your love;
So I may free my soul, be Reborn
And locate the remnants of Me.
My universal place lies dormant
Beyond my grasp;buried beneath the years.

My gifts are hidden deep within
Coursing through my veins and struggling  
To overcome the menial duties of life.

I am not whole in your restricting embrace.
Peace escapes me at every turn;
Contentment is no longer my goal.
Release me so I may be vital again;
To mend the remnants of Me.

                  




 
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1 posted 02-18-2000 11:58 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to Passions. Please check your email for a special welcome....I like your work and look forward to reading more..
Chris Goodman
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2 posted 02-19-2000 12:05 AM       View Profile for Chris Goodman   Email Chris Goodman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chris Goodman

I truly loved this poem.  Very sad, but a lot of things tend to hold us back.  Those things are just masked in the face of fears that slowly release us, but not all at once.   Well written.

Chris


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CMGrimm
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3 posted 02-19-2000 12:11 AM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

Beautifully written piece.  Welcome to Passions.  Hope to read more of your work in the future.

Chris


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Eloise
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4 posted 02-19-2000 12:14 AM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

Very thought provoking poem. I enjoyed the read.  Welcome to Passions.  
sonjes
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5 posted 02-19-2000 09:16 AM       View Profile for sonjes   Email sonjes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sonjes

Thank you for the kind welcome to such a fabulous site.  All of you inspire me to grow as a writer, as well as an individual.  I continue to read in awe at the great talent featured here.  Thank you all for sharing your intimate thoughts.
Nan
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Nice work, sonjes - Let's see some more of your good stuff...
Passions welcomes you!!..
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7 posted 02-20-2000 01:05 PM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Sonjes,

I too carry those same thoughts alot, I,m glad to know I'm not alone.
Welcome to Passions

Cerenity-1
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8 posted 02-20-2000 03:04 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Sonjes~

to the lovely home of tender-hearted poets.
This was just the loveliest of entries.
Enjoy your stay.
~*Marge*~



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Beautiful...I like this alot.  Look forward to see more of your work!
Nichole
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