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Canopy of Stars (Challenge from Lost Dreamer)
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Canopy of Stars (Challenge from Lost Dreamer) |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648
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We sway beneath a canopy of stars < !signature-->To music strumming softly on guitars On velvet sands you hold me in strong arms And fly me to the moon with all your charms. You softly whisper sweet things in my ear A fire burns as close you hold me near And to the pounding rhythm of the sea We lose ourselves in passion’s ecstasy. Then underneath soft moonlit midnight skies We lie enraptured gazing into eyes Now singing songs of our undying love Heard only by we two and stars above. Once more you pull me close and gently kiss My face, my neck, again I know your bliss; As cheek to cheek we stroll along the dock You vanish to the clanging of my clock. Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 02-18-2000).] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
WoooHoooooo Denise! This is great and passionate and wonderful!  <*\\\>< There's only two ways you can go... One way you can save your riches, And the other will save your soul. Rich Mullins |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Denise, You take my challenges and make delightful poems from them, this is wonderful, so now I know where my Magical Man went after my dream. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Hey, Denise, you are really hot tonight! And so prolific! To what do we owe this sudden pouring of poetic passion? This is great! Keep it up! And besides being passionate, this poem happens to be very beautiful. liz |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Beautiful poems seem to flow from you ... no matter what the subject Rex}<{{{{o> |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
This is very beautiful Denise. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Denise, A delightful surprise and a wonderful poem. *L* Sy |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
WOW...I think my son must have turned up the heat or something. Great poem...mind lending me some of your inspiration for a while since I seem to have lost all mine  |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Beautiful and passionate, Denise! Corinne |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
You are dreaming up some true romantic images here Denise. Beautiful! I say throw that clock out the window. |
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Justin Tolerable Junior Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 13 |
Hey baby! Thanks for writing this about me. I want all the ladies to know who I am.  I know you all worship me and I am ready for the next in line. Come and get it ladies.  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wow! Thank you all for your wonderful responses! This was written in response to a challenge from Lost Dreamer to answer what her 'Dream Man' was doing after her alarm clock went off.....hehehehe......he was romancing me!!!  J.T.- sorry, only one man owns my heart....Lost Dreamer's 'Dream Man'....hehehe p.s. I tried to dream of him last night but, alas, the only thing that I dreamed of, that I can remember, was pizza!! (I'm on a low carbohydrate diet.....so I guess you all know where my mind is at..hehehehe) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Very nice poem. |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Very sexy Denise. "you gently kiss my face my neck"...excellent. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Whew, Denise! You got a lot going on under that grandmotherly exterior! Love it! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Denise~ Whew! Hot! I love dreams like that, only I get to wake up next to my dream man!  I really liked this. -SEA |
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dash rendor Junior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 21 |
Denise(can i call you Denise, i dont know you but youve made me feel so close)this is a wonderful poem. I read all your poems, and i think you are wonderful. Very well done. Whenever i need inspiration, i always look to one of your poems. Thank you! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you, Vandana, Julie, Balladeer, Sea and Dash for reading and responding! I'm glad you all liked it! Denise |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Well, it was a beautiful dream while it lasted, and you can always think of it throughout the day! |
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