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Canopy of Stars (Challenge from Lost Dreamer)

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Denise
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0 posted 02-18-2000 07:50 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Denise

We sway beneath a canopy of stars
To music strumming softly on guitars
On velvet sands you hold me in strong arms
And fly me to the moon with all your charms.

You softly whisper sweet things in my ear
A fire burns as close you hold me near
And to the pounding rhythm of the sea
We lose ourselves in passionís ecstasy.

Then underneath soft moonlit midnight skies
We lie enraptured gazing into eyes
Now singing songs of our undying love
Heard only by we two and stars above.

Once more you pull me close and gently kiss
My face, my neck, again I know your bliss;
As cheek to cheek we stroll along the dock
You vanish to the clanging of my clock.




†Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~



[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 02-18-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Denise - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 02-18-2000 09:57 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

WoooHoooooo Denise! This is great and passionate and wonderful!  

 <*\\\><

There's only two ways you can go...
One way you can save your riches,
And the other will save your soul.
Rich Mullins
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2 posted 02-18-2000 10:05 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Denise, You take my challenges and make delightful poems from them, this is wonderful, so now I know where my Magical Man went after my dream.
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3 posted 02-18-2000 11:23 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Hey, Denise, you are really hot tonight!
And so prolific! To what do we owe this sudden pouring of poetic passion? This is great! Keep it up! And besides being passionate, this poem happens to be very beautiful.
liz
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4 posted 02-18-2000 11:35 PM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

Beautiful poems seem to flow from you ... no matter what the subject

Rex}<{{{{o>
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5 posted 02-18-2000 11:46 PM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

This is very beautiful Denise.
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6 posted 02-18-2000 11:55 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Denise,
A delightful surprise and a wonderful poem.
*L* Sy
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WOW...I think my son must have turned up the heat or something. Great poem...mind lending me some of your inspiration for a while since I seem to have lost all mine  
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Beautiful and passionate, Denise!

Corinne
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You are dreaming up some true romantic images here Denise.  Beautiful!  I say throw that clock out the window.
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Hey baby! Thanks for writing this about me. I want all the ladies to know who I am.  
I know you all worship me and I am ready for the next in line. Come and get it ladies.  
Denise
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11 posted 02-19-2000 01:35 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Wow! Thank you all for your wonderful responses! This was written in response to a challenge from Lost Dreamer to answer what her 'Dream Man' was doing after her alarm clock went off.....hehehehe......he was romancing me!!!  

J.T.- sorry, only one man owns my heart....Lost Dreamer's 'Dream Man'....hehehe

p.s. I tried to dream of him last night but, alas, the only thing that I dreamed of, that I can remember, was pizza!! (I'm on a low carbohydrate diet.....so I guess you all know where my mind is at..hehehehe)  
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Very nice poem.
Julie
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13 posted 02-19-2000 09:15 PM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

Very sexy Denise. "you gently kiss my face my neck"...excellent.
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14 posted 02-19-2000 09:21 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Whew, Denise! You got a lot going on under that grandmotherly exterior! Love it!  
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Denise~ Whew! Hot! I love dreams like that, only I get to wake up next to my dream man! I really liked this. -SEA
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Denise(can i call you Denise, i dont know you but youve made me feel so close)this is a wonderful poem.  I read all your poems, and i think you are wonderful.  Very well done.  Whenever i need inspiration, i always look to one of your poems.  Thank you!
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17 posted 02-19-2000 11:21 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you, Vandana, Julie, Balladeer, Sea and Dash for reading and responding!  I'm glad you all liked it!

Denise
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18 posted 09-07-2016 02:27 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Well, it was a beautiful dream while it lasted, and you can always think of it throughout the day!
 
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