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cK Navarro
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since 2000-02-12
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0 posted 2000-02-18 07:44 PM



FOREVER MISSING YOU
by cK Navarro


I miss you more than words can say
To see you is what I wish for every single day.

As the night comes I would visit the memories of our yesterdays
I would see you there loving me in your own special way
Tears would roll down my face
As I try to give myself your sweet loving embrace
I feel pain in my heart for your love I could not replace
Nor could I even ever fill this huge empty space.

When the morning light comes shinning down on me
I let my thoughts fly to where you might be
Where time goes by again wishing you here with me.

I don´t know what am I going to do
   going through this life without you
And I don´t know how am I going to survive
   walking in this world without being alive.

One thing I do know is that I love you way beyond anyone could ever do
I´ll be here I will wait for you
Hoping the future saved a place for me and you
But if there´s no, then I guess I will have to live the rest of my life  
   forever missing you.

                     --  CRIS  --


© Copyright 2000 Cris Kay Navarro - All Rights Reserved
Brent Hotchkin
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1 posted 2000-02-18 08:40 PM


Excelent Chris. I almost sunk back into the whole I lived in when I was there. But I remembered that I have moved on and lived to love again. There is always someone better out there. All we have to do is look. But dont look too hard or you will never find her. It is a thin line we walk.
SEA
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2 posted 2000-02-18 10:32 PM


Chris~ Love has a way of sneaking up on you. This was a beautiful poem. Leave your heart open and love will come in! -SEA
cK Navarro
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since 2000-02-12
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Helsinki Finland
3 posted 2000-02-19 10:22 AM


Thank you, Brent and SEA, for reading and sharing your thoughts on this. It´s greatly apreciated.

                                          cK

Corinne
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4 posted 2000-02-19 10:27 AM


Poignant and beautiful, cK.

Corinne

Saxoness
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5 posted 2000-02-19 10:31 AM


I love the line "As I try to give myself your sweet loving embrace"  that really says it all about lonliness, doesn't it?

 "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


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