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I loved you

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Brent Hotchkin
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since 02-15-2000
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Florida,USA


0 posted 02-18-2000 07:06 PM       View Profile for Brent Hotchkin   Email Brent Hotchkin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Brent Hotchkin

I loved you.
Before we kissed,
Before we touched,
Before you entranced,
Before we lust.
Before we knew of pleasures untold,
I could clearly see.
That beneath your breasts lied the key.
To the depths of my soul.
That would someday set me free.

Where is this place you take me?
Where the earth meets the stars.
I am not sure, but I know its only ours.
It looks as if its here well play.
When your near the world seems so far away.
I see heaven in your eyes.
I feel your words before you speak,
And when your smile on me.
My heart gets weak.
What is this feeling?
Ive never met anyone above you.
It must be, because,
I love you!

© Copyright 2000 Brent Hotchkin - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 02-18-2000 07:36 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Yep, it definately sounds like love.  Enjoy it!
cK Navarro
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since 02-12-2000
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Helsinki Finland


2 posted 02-18-2000 08:05 PM       View Profile for cK Navarro   Email cK Navarro   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cK Navarro

Yeah must be love, what else there could be but that. Thats mostly why we are all here stuck day and night in Passions, dont you agree?

Nice poem keep going!

Greetings from the other side of the world

                                        cK
poetFemmeFatale
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since 07-25-99
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3 posted 02-19-2000 01:09 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Yep...this is just oozzzing with love-sick man!  LOL Now I know why you keep some of these poems in your black book.  I think your book resembles mine a great deal!  hehe  All the things that make me seem vulnerable are in there....      Very nice read!
CMGrimm
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since 02-14-2000
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4 posted 02-19-2000 01:13 AM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

Very very very nice read.   I liked this one alot.  Thanks for sharing it with us.

Chris

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.
Parker
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since 01-06-2000
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... the old black rum


5 posted 02-19-2000 02:39 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Brent,  Its been a long time since somebody did that to me. I miss it greatly. Great poem.

Parker
Brent Hotchkin
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6 posted 02-19-2000 11:40 AM       View Profile for Brent Hotchkin   Email Brent Hotchkin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Brent Hotchkin

Thank you all. Yup that was one of those moments you hope never goes away, but most of the time they do. I am glad I captured it because it helps me find my way when I get lost or "loose it" I am so happy that I found this site and you guys to share with.
babeluv73
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since 04-05-2000
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7 posted 04-05-2000 10:47 AM       View Profile for babeluv73   Email babeluv73   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for babeluv73

hello my love. i just want to tell you how happy i am to be intertwined in your heart. i love you.

Theresa (the love you wrote the poem about)

[This message has been edited by babeluv73 (edited 04-10-2000).]
star 15
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8 posted 04-05-2000 10:55 AM       View Profile for star 15   Email star 15   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for star 15

great poem i enjoyed it.

love those kind of poems
poetFemmeFatale
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9 posted 04-05-2000 11:14 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Geesh, for a minute I thought you had posted a new poem here, and I got all excited!  LOL  Although I've already commented on this one, I will add, that I do believe you know what love is - this poem portrays that for a fact.  To have real love, it takes TWO people working on it though...I wonder - - were you alone in your feelings here?  I kind of get that vibe...Psst...since you are JUST like me, I know your passions that you speak of, I'm not just taking sides here.  That's why my faith is in you...as I don't "know" her.  You understand.  Still a passionate poem sir!
hoot_owl_rn
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10 posted 04-05-2000 11:38 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Sounds like love to me  
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on the threshold of a dream


11 posted 04-05-2000 05:02 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Love does all that! *S* This is great!
Elizabeth Santos
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12 posted 04-05-2000 08:53 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

I like the effects that spring air has on you.It brings out all romantic notions in your poetry. This was very passionate and loving and well written

Liz
babeluv73
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13 posted 04-09-2000 01:25 PM       View Profile for babeluv73   Email babeluv73   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for babeluv73

    Jennifer, you shouldn't pass judgment on people you don't know. i don't expect you to understand the message because it wasn't intended for you.

    Hey babe, i love the poem and i love you. Thank you for everything, especially your understanding..."i'll love you till the last star burns out."

Theresa



[This message has been edited by babeluv73 (edited 04-10-2000).]
Joannak
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14 posted 04-09-2000 02:56 PM       View Profile for Joannak   Email Joannak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Joannak

Brent,
what a wonderful poem, I really enjoyed it.  You create some strong images.

Joanna
 
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