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A Moment Intertwined

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PoeticKnight
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If the stars should pass us by
And time remains still
I will be waiting for you
Like I always will
What I had felt was so real
Is just a memory now
Maybe it was all a dream
But I donít know how
All the important things are gone
And space is the new frontier
Realization of this loss of hope
Is the only thing I fear
Though our minds have begun to decline,
Led down the path of despair
Our souls remain intertwined
In that moment we briefly shared

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1 posted 02-18-2000 06:37 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

JML~ very touching! But, you know I like your poetry very much!  -SEA
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2 posted 02-18-2000 07:50 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

This is quite good...I like it...  
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3 posted 02-20-2000 03:39 PM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

JML,

The sharring of the soul weather a short or long period of time is always deeply inbedded into our memries.And I think the fear is to know that in order to reach some kind of conclusion to our pain we will have to enduer the reality that it brings with it.
This was a good one, look forward to more of your work.

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Shelley
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4 posted 02-20-2000 03:47 PM       View Profile for Shelley   Email Shelley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Shelley

I agree with Cerenity (very nicely put by the way)

Memory...what a great teacher.

Nice job!
PoeticKnight
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5 posted 02-21-2000 10:05 AM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoeticKnight

Thank ya'll very much. It amazes me that you all caught the underlying theme so well. You flatter me so much.
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6 posted 02-22-2000 03:28 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

"If the stars should pass us by
And time remains still
I will be waiting for you
Like I always will
What I had felt was so real
Is just a memory now
Maybe it was all a dream
But I donít know how"...

JML...I love this one...its beautiful...
poetry in motion...
take care, janet marie


 ...every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
every poem and song...
every rhyme and verse...
your still here...like a beautiful curse.
your my inspiration, your my fire...
your words fill me with poetic desire.
Every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
Janet Marie
*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*

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JML~
This is lovely.
Hope is the cornerstone
of all our dreams ...
whether they come true or not.
Walk softly among your memories.
They are where you've been.
~*Marge*~


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