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A Moment Intertwined
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A Moment Intertwined |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
If the stars should pass us by And time remains still I will be waiting for you Like I always will What I had felt was so real Is just a memory now Maybe it was all a dream But I don’t know how All the important things are gone And space is the new frontier Realization of this loss of hope Is the only thing I fear Though our minds have begun to decline, Led down the path of despair Our souls remain intertwined In that moment we briefly shared |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
JML~ very touching! But, you know I like your poetry very much!  -SEA |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is quite good...I like it...  |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
JML, The sharring of the soul weather a short or long period of time is always deeply inbedded into our memries.And I think the fear is to know that in order to reach some kind of conclusion to our pain we will have to enduer the reality that it brings with it. This was a good one, look forward to more of your work. Cerenity-1 |
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Shelley Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 263Ohio, USA |
I agree with Cerenity (very nicely put by the way) Memory...what a great teacher. Nice job! |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Thank ya'll very much. It amazes me that you all caught the underlying theme so well. You flatter me so much. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
"If the stars should pass us by And time remains still I will be waiting for you Like I always will What I had felt was so real Is just a memory now Maybe it was all a dream But I don’t know how"... JML...I love this one...its beautiful... poetry in motion... take care, janet marie ...every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. every poem and song... every rhyme and verse... your still here...like a beautiful curse. your my inspiration, your my fire... your words fill me with poetic desire. Every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JML~ This is lovely. Hope is the cornerstone of all our dreams ... whether they come true or not. Walk softly among your memories. They are where you've been. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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