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My paper wedding band
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My paper wedding band |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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My paper wedding band There are some moments of warmth and joy I saved and stored like my childhood toys. Garnered in sly and secret stealth, Cached them away like hidden wealth. Effects, full of embellished cherish, Like candy and cake that I so relish. Moments and feelings from past exposure, Laughter and tears of secret enclosure. Voices and faces on memories part, All the sensations that warmed my heart. I scribbled in verse and rhyme with pleasure, Writing them down in pen and inks measure. Under lock and key they lie in state, Under lock and key they lie in wait. They hold the facts of significant things. The chimes I heard of meaningful rings. And with this paper wedding band, I give to thee, my understand. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Sy - another terrific poem - I love the way it flows, and the phrases you use are excellent! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Sy:..So long as she has the key..  HUGS Ouvrir mon coeur et âme |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Oh, my, this was wonderful! You do have a way with words!  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I would love to open this treasure box The one that's under keys and locks And witness all of the wonderful things And pleasures that your childhood brings It is a box of wealth for sure To contain the past of a character so pure |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This poem is so pleasing and the last lines made me smile. Thank you Sy for the wonder that is you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LngJhnAg, Thank you for the wonderful comments. Rainbow, Thanks for the hugs. *L* Poet deVine, Thank you for the wonderful. *L* Elizabeth, It's not a pandoras box but a Seymours box. Thank you for the sweet answer. Love Sy Martie, And you Martie for the wonder that is you. *L* |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Oh, Sy, this is so beautiful! This really touched my nostalgic heart!! Denise |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
You express yourself so well, Seymour, I always look forward to reading your work. corinne |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Denise, Thanks for the beautiful comment. *L* Corinne, As I enjoy reading your work, thank you again. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sy what a wonderful read thankyou for sharing it..  tracie |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Sy this was beautiful precious memories and dreams. I like a sensitive guy!! May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Seymore....this is wonderful |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Surely another true Sy. I can read and read and read I will always find new words or styles in your poetry. Never the same. Amazing. The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
I, too, enjoyed your engaging poetic reminiscence, Seymour. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Simply wonderful Sy ..... 'S' |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tracie, You welcome and thank you for the comment. Isis, Thank you for the sensitive. *L* Hoot, Thank you for the wonderful. *L* Helmut, Thank you for the amazing. Meadow, You are a love, thank you. Pepper, Thank you so much, *L* |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is delightful, Seymour! *S* |
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