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A Kiss Before Dying

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Marina
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A Kiss Before Dying


Waken “Child of Darkness” from the point of no return
A soulless creature in Hell you forever burn
Skin transparent pale winter white
Seeks  victims unsuspecting in the black of night
Footprints soft and silent,  never will they hear
Powers from the crypt, it is you that they fear
Warm flow of blood, thirst too  lust
Powerless to fight, relax in your touch
Pounce the tiger with fangs of death
Useless struggles to draw one last breath
Feed upon mortals forever stay alive
Thrill of the kill in this you thrive
Offer the gift , or to let die
Life’s red blood wine drunk till dry
The master at work chills to the bone
In misery’s moon never walk alone
Creatures of darkness softly sighing
Forever offer a last kiss before dying


Marina Feb 18/2000


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LngJhnAg
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wow marina!  This is truly macabre - very nicley put together.  Yanno, if you posted your peekshure in here, I could say the same about you  (either you're macabre looking, or nicely put together - lol).
Marina
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LingJhnAg:Thank-you.  You certainly have me very curious now, I'm interested as to what you think I may look like....and please be creative...

Marina
Danny Holloway
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I like the title and the verse.  The life of the Vampire, so well described in your poem.
Nicely written as well.
Danny  
Corinne
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Sent chills down my spine, Marina!


Corinne
Marina
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5 posted 02-18-2000 05:58 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Danny and  Corrine: thanks to you both.  I think the title you choose can make an impact to your poem.

Marina
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