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Sven
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0 posted 2000-02-18 03:51 PM


This one is for Isis. . . .

Every day we speak to each other
Without really saying a word
Every day the words she writes
Are the sweetest things I've ever heard

Every day I see her heart
I see its ups and its downs
Every day I try to make her day
To fill it with smiles instead of frowns

Every day I see her face
I see the warmth and love in her eyes
Every day I see her smile
Its brightness rivals the eastern sunrise

Every day we grow closer
Kindred of spirit and kindred of heart
Every day our spirits fly together
Together we'll always be, spirits that will never part

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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Elizabeth
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1 posted 2000-02-18 05:42 PM


Sven, what a beautiful poem! I am most sure that Isis will wholeheartedly enjoy it.

Elizabeth

 "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!"
-The Crucible


Poet deVine
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2 posted 2000-02-18 07:42 PM


A wonderful poem for a sweet lady! Good job!  

cK Navarro
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3 posted 2000-02-18 07:57 PM


Nice poem you got here!

                     Greetings from Finland
                             cK

Corinne
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4 posted 2000-02-18 10:34 PM


Such sweet words of compassion, Sven, and a beautiful tribute!


Corinne

Shelley
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5 posted 2000-02-19 12:04 PM


Kindred spirits are very special and you have captured that beauty in this poem.
She is a lucky lady.

Eloise
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6 posted 2000-02-19 12:19 PM


Sven, this is very lovely.  
CMGrimm
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7 posted 2000-02-19 12:20 PM


Beautiful Sven....just beautiful.

Chris

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.

Nan
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8 posted 2000-02-19 12:15 PM


The cerebral connections we make here are quite astounding, aren't they? Nice work, Sven..
Sven
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9 posted 2000-02-19 12:43 PM


Thank you all. . . and yes Nan. . . they are. .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Isis
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10 posted 2000-02-20 05:27 AM


Sven hon, you are an angel and indeed my kindred.  It is wonderful how we have each other to lean on, to be there for one another.  I thank you for this loving tribute and our loving friendship.  (HUGS) my kindred and thankyou.  

 May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



JamesMichael
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11 posted 2000-02-20 07:59 AM


Sven there is so much love and admiration in this poem and I know she feels the same for you.  A joy to read for I love her too.   James
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12 posted 2000-02-20 09:57 AM


Sven...what a nice poem for a wonderful person. She is lucky to have a friend, a muse, such as yourself
Elizabeth Santos
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13 posted 2000-02-20 10:56 AM


With words like these, your frienship will get closer every day
Liz

Sven
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14 posted 2000-02-21 01:10 PM


Again. . . thank you all. ..

Elizabeth--I know that we will grow closer day by day. . . thank you. . .

Hoot--Yes, she is indeed one of my muses. . . I'm sure you know who the other one is. . .that's at least 2. . . aren't there 9?  I need 7 more!  LOL

James--I know how you feel about Isis. . .and it's good to know that she has so many friends. . .

Isis--I am so glad that you liked it. . . you are indeed my muse and I am so thankful for our special friendship. . . it does indeed help me and makes me feel good. . . thank you my kindred. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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15 posted 2000-02-21 02:16 PM


This is soooo sweet Sven...you are quite a man!!!

Nothing lasts longer than friendship...except maybe true love!!!!< !signature-->

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...


[This message has been edited by devina (edited 02-21-2000).]

tracie66
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16 posted 2000-02-22 02:20 AM


Sven that is so beautiful, what a great tribute to Isis. WONDERFUL     tracie
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