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Corinne
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0 posted 02-18-2000 11:37 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Corinne

A voice sooths my senses
it reaches deep inside,
I hear the words but itís the song
that quenches this Saharan tide.

Like an undercurrent
of the oceanís roar,
some mystical lure,
alluding to much more.

When weíre face to face
some distant memories,
of another space and age,
are what my mind sees.

In that touch of hand
some familiar gesture,
sends my spirit to soar,
my heart to enrapture.

Now I know what is meant
by songs of deja vu
all becomes clear,
in these images of you.

© 2000 Corinne Bailey



[This message has been edited by Corinne (edited 02-18-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Corinne - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 02-18-2000 11:45 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Exquisitly beautiful, as always, Corinne!

Denise
Parker
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The heart beats slowly at the softness of your poetry.

Parker
Corinne
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3 posted 02-18-2000 10:19 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Thank you, Denise, you are always so kind!

Parker, you speak in prose and poetry, in riddles and in rhymes, somehow these words speak to me, visions of northern climes.

Cor
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 02-18-2000 11:59 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Corinne,
It seems you have been touched by love. Beautiful poem. *L*
CMGrimm
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5 posted 02-19-2000 01:11 AM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

very beautiful Corinne...

Chris

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.
HelmutB
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6 posted 02-19-2000 06:36 AM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

I see you have a gentle heart
Your poetry has a very special art
reflections of your face
words wraped around with grace
Very nice poem


 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

Lost Dreamer
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7 posted 02-19-2000 06:42 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

This is a beautifully written and expressed poem, I love it.
Marge Tindal
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8 posted 02-19-2000 07:10 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Corinne~
You let your heart speak outloud.
Beautiful.
~*Marge*~



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Corinne
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9 posted 02-19-2000 09:42 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Seymour, you are one perceptive poet!

Grimm and Lost Dreamer - thank you!

Marge, I shall try!  Thank you (smiling)

Helmut, thank you for the lovely poetic response.

This place is so uplifting!

Corinne

hoot_owl_rn
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10 posted 02-19-2000 09:47 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Oh how very beautiful  
Parker
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and you are the Sweet Dream, sweet Corinne.

Parker

Severn
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12 posted 02-21-2000 07:36 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Another beauty...love it Corinne!

K

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life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath
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13 posted 02-21-2000 09:49 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Beautiful, Corinne. Your talent is exceptional.
Corinne
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Hoot, Balladeer, Severn, thank you!

Sweet Parker, thank you, again!


Corinne
 
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