You expressed your emotions with such passion in this poem, glad I'm not the person either that this relates to, but if I was, I would hope I had the sense to knock on your door long before it came to this.
Denise, This is excellent, Keep them rolling don't stop now, I see a sapling growing into a tree.
Wow, wonderful, powerful poem and the timing is perfect, my friend is doing the same to me and I have no idea why...It isn't easy, probably one of the hardest things I've gone through...but she doesn't seem to care, sad to see it's not only me. I hope all works out for you soon.
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
Thank you BSC,Nan and Eloise for your kind responses. I'm glad you liked it!
BSC- I suppose this is just one of those heartbreaking things in life that we have to accept. Perhaps they were never really friends to begin with, as WhtDove said above, but as in everything that comes our way in life we have to look for the silver lining and take whatever lessons we have learned and go on, much wiser for the experience. I'm sorry for your present pain, too. HUGS
WOW,WOW again I have been hidding from a friend because she was very mean to me, but know that I read this I think I'm going to call her and set up some thing because I would never want any one to ever feel that way about me even if she treated me the way she did.
I found that as I read this, I became sad for you and this person. For you to have been treated as such, and for the person not knowing what type of heart they were betraying. Good bit. And thanks for your kind words on my postings. James
Florida's Foreverly Shores
I love this because (how's this for a strange parallel?) like the music of nine inch nails, you manage to show the extreme beauty and power of words, even when working up into a rage. Great work, and a reminder there's always something worthwhile to go on to.