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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA

0 posted 2000-02-18 11:11 AM


(here's looking to seeing you both fly in the near future   Hugs to you both, Ruth)

She Flies With Her Own Wings

For many years, he held her back
He told her not to dream
He was like a river wild
She like a gentle stream

She craved for love and happiness
But kept it all inside
Spent her days in quiet fear
Tethered by his side

She watched the sky with wishful eyes
And dreamed of when she'd fly
Cried herself to sleep at night
As life just passed her by

Caged by lifes own cruelty
She was captured in his grasp
While he raised his hands in anger
Hers in prayer she clasped

One day her prayers were answered
For she left him far behind
Released the chains of hurt and hate
And all the ties that bind

Now she flies with her own wings
In skies pearlescent white
Loosed from the bounds of all her fears
She soars in graceful flight

Where she lands will still be seen
The worlds an open slate
She'll write a story all her own
For now she holds her fate

At last she's free, no longer caged
And no matter where she'll roam
Those injured wings, now greatly healed
Will guide her safely home



 Have you ever noticed
That the words...
"Goodbye"
"I'm sorry"
"I love you"
Are so easy to pronounce
...Yet so hard to say
~Javan

© Copyright 2000 Ruth Kephart - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
1 posted 2000-02-18 11:33 AM


This is most EXCELLENT Ruth!  I love this one, oh it touches so close to home!

 <*\\\><

There's only two ways you can go...
One way you can save your riches,
And the other will save your soul.
Rich Mullins

Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
2 posted 2000-02-18 11:35 AM


What a wonderful message of strength Ruth and exceptionally well written.  
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-02-18 11:39 AM


Thanks for reposting this, Ruth. This is one of my favorites of yours. I felt when reading this the first time that it could have been written about my life. I guess there are many of us who share the same past. Flying is so wonderful, isn't it?!

Denise

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
4 posted 2000-02-18 07:15 PM


Thank you Martie, Whtdove and Denise...this one holds a special place in my heart too  
Wizzard
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since 2000-02-09
Posts 209

5 posted 2000-02-19 02:35 AM



I think that all of GOD`s Creation`s should be free so that we may all enjoy their Beauty.
Thank`s again for sharing another of your work`s of art Ruth



 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.


Parker
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since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129
ON
6 posted 2000-02-19 02:58 AM


Hoot,

I loved this the first time I read it, but I think I like it better now.

Parker

christies heart
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since 1999-08-10
Posts 189
NJ, USA
7 posted 2000-02-19 03:44 AM


This is a great poem. I love the truth and meaning in it.

 Grant that I may not judge my niegbor until I have walked a mile in his moccasians

Native American prayer


HelmutB
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since 2000-01-06
Posts 964
Canada
8 posted 2000-02-19 06:26 AM


Although I know this one inside out
I still read and I still say "Wow"
Hugs and love


 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
9 posted 2000-02-19 09:00 AM


Thank you everyone  

One Day I'll Soar

I may never fly
On graceful wing
Or voice my song
Like robins sing
Or know the secrets
Revealed in flight
In heavens dark
On starry night
I may never know
What wings are for
But mark my words
One day I'll soar


Corinne
Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167
state of confusion
10 posted 2000-02-19 10:25 AM


Hoot, I loved this so.

Please see post that you inspired called
On Broken Wing.


Corinne

Saxoness
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Senior Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102
Texas
11 posted 2000-02-19 10:34 AM


Most excellent piece. And your reply was just as lovely! Good job

 "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


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