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Open Poetry #6

Card Game Of Love

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

0 posted 2000-02-18 10:59 AM

The cards have been delt and
the game is under way, which
card do you play next my love?
The cards bare the symbols of
life's games and you must act
upon your play or you forfeit
the prize.

What shall it be my love the
card of distence or the card
baring false pretenses, what
shall it be my love? I've been
patient, I am understanding, I
have shown you that.

I hold in my hands the cards
of forever-true happiness and
contentment, but from what I
can see you have been playing
the game with all faul cards
that do not fuse with mine.

My love please take your time
to decide which card to play
and please remember that this
game you could loose that in
which you so called cherished,
and then there will be no one
for you to play with any more
my love.

Cerenity

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

1 posted 2000-02-18 11:07 AM

I like the title and the original content.
Nicely written!
Danny

devina
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

2 posted 2000-02-18 01:29 PM

Point towards the King of hearts and everything will work out fine!!!! Very original indeed!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2000-02-18 01:46 PM

Cerenity~ Great poem! "Game" indeed! Cool way to express the feelings here!

-SEA

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 2000-02-18 03:05 PM

A great way of putting the cards on the table!! You have expressed this well, Cerenity!

Denise

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