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Card Game Of Love

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Cerenity
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0 posted 02-18-2000 10:59 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Cerenity


The cards have been delt and
the game is under way, which
card do you play next my love?
The cards bare the symbols of
life's games and you must act
upon your play or you forfeit
the prize.

What shall it be my love the
card of distence or the card
baring false pretenses, what
shall it be my love? I've been
patient, I am understanding, I
have shown you that.

I hold in my hands the cards
of forever-true happiness and
contentment, but from what I
can see you have been playing
the game with all faul cards
that do not fuse with mine.

My love please take your time
to decide which card to play
and please remember that this
game you could loose that in
which you so called cherished,
and then there will be no one
for you to play with any more
my love.

Cerenity

© Copyright 2000 Ellen Ware - All Rights Reserved
Danny Holloway
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1 posted 02-18-2000 11:07 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

I like the title and the original content.
Nicely written!
Danny
devina
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2 posted 02-18-2000 01:29 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Point towards the King of hearts and everything will work out fine!!!! Very original indeed!!!

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3 posted 02-18-2000 01:46 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Cerenity~ Great poem! "Game" indeed! Cool way to express the feelings here! -SEA
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A great way of putting the cards on the table!! You have expressed this well, Cerenity!  

Denise
 
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