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Nurse Crachet
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0 posted 02-18-2000 07:41 AM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Nurse Crachet

Slinky

I start
at the top
of the stairs
each step
a ripple
of desire
one by one
I expand
and contract
reaching
ever closer
to my destiny.
You raced
on by me
to the floor
below
where slinking
slowly
I reach you
only
for you
to carry
me back
up
to the top
of the stairs
so I can
entertain
your senses
with my only
present
Slinky talent.

© Copyright 2000 Nurse Crachet - All Rights Reserved
CMGrimm
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1 posted 02-18-2000 08:38 AM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

Now that is creative....I loved it.

Chris

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.
Nurse Crachet
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2 posted 02-18-2000 10:41 AM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

Thank You Chris, I had fun with it.
Denise
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3 posted 02-18-2000 11:02 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is so creative, Nursie! Wonderful fun poem!
Nurse Crachet
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4 posted 02-18-2000 11:32 AM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

Denise: Thank You, it was very fun to play
        with, you should try it sometime.
Martie
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5 posted 02-18-2000 12:53 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

You gotta love those slinkies and this poem!
Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 02-18-2000 01:17 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

I read this poem about a slinky
And now I want to play, I thinky
I'll tie a string around my pinky
To remember to go out and buy a slinky
Loved this!
And I love slinkys!
Liz
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7 posted 02-18-2000 03:51 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Slink by me anytime you wondrous spring.

(Nurse C... this was very slick... my compliments)
Nurse Crachet
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8 posted 02-18-2000 05:13 PM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

Martie: Thank You, I wish I had one now.

Elizebeth Santos: Thank You,
                  I need to do the same

Andrew: Thank You, Now you want a Spring?
   I guess Lady in Red was to much for you.
Nan
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9 posted 02-19-2000 10:55 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

We can all get one  - and have a slinky race...
 
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