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Nurse Crachet
Member

since 1999-09-27

Posts 318
They know where I am!

0 posted 2000-02-18 07:41 AM

Slinky

I start
at the top
of the stairs
each step
a ripple
of desire
one by one
I expand
and contract
reaching
ever closer
to my destiny.
You raced
on by me
to the floor
below
where slinking
slowly
I reach you
only
for you
to carry
me back
up
to the top
of the stairs
so I can
entertain
your senses
with my only
present
Slinky talent.

CMGrimm
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 685
USA

1 posted 2000-02-18 08:38 AM

Now that is creative....I loved it.

Chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.

Nurse Crachet
Member

since 1999-09-27

Posts 318
They know where I am!

2 posted 2000-02-18 10:41 AM

Thank You Chris, I had fun with it.

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-02-18 11:02 AM

This is so creative, Nursie! Wonderful fun poem!

Nurse Crachet
Member

since 1999-09-27

Posts 318
They know where I am!

4 posted 2000-02-18 11:32 AM

Denise: Thank You, it was very fun to play
with, you should try it sometime.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2000-02-18 12:53 PM

You gotta love those slinkies and this poem!

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

6 posted 2000-02-18 01:17 PM

I read this poem about a slinky
And now I want to play, I thinky
I'll tie a string around my pinky
To remember to go out and buy a slinky
Loved this!
And I love slinkys!
Liz

Andrew Scott
Member Elite

since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

7 posted 2000-02-18 03:51 PM

Slink by me anytime you wondrous spring.

(Nurse C... this was very slick... my compliments)

Nurse Crachet
Member

since 1999-09-27

Posts 318
They know where I am!

8 posted 2000-02-18 05:13 PM

Martie: Thank You, I wish I had one now.

Elizebeth Santos: Thank You,
I need to do the same

Andrew: Thank You, Now you want a Spring?
I guess Lady in Red was to much for you.

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

9 posted 2000-02-19 10:55 AM

We can all get one - and have a slinky race...

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