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Magical Man

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Lost Dreamer
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0 posted 02-18-2000 06:25 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Magical Man

Out on the dance floor
he stood there longing more
as the band began a slow dance,
with interest I did prance
over to his tall built presence
lacking the element of female essence.
Mesmerized by his stunning blue eyes
I slowly realize how time flies.
Frozen in a state of unbelievable intrigue
seemed he belonged in a different league.
Our arms now encompassing each other
I felt comfort like that of my mother.
So soft and gentle was his embrace
I desired to never leave this place.
The graceful manner to his steps
took my emotions through many depths.
His unending body radiated chemistry
sending me into a whirl of mystery.
I felt my heart beating out of control
my body heat rising hotter than coal.
I was lost in this dancer's magnitude
desiring to reach deep into his altitude.
All of a sudden I hear the alarm scream
realizing this magical man is only a dream.

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1 posted 02-18-2000 06:51 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

LostDreamer~
Throw that alarm clock out !

Go back to bed !

I like this.
~*Marge*~



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Shelley
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2 posted 02-18-2000 07:37 AM       View Profile for Shelley   Email Shelley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Shelley

I like this,
but I agree with Marge,
throw the alarm clock out
and go back to bed!   LOL
CMGrimm
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3 posted 02-18-2000 09:40 AM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

Gosh...don't ya just hate that?

wonderful read.

Chris

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.
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4 posted 02-18-2000 11:00 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I just hate that when that happens!! Wow! What a dream.......hmmmmmmm....maybe I'll go back to bed and try to dream him up!! This is wonderful, Gloria! I love it!!

Denise
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5 posted 02-18-2000 11:03 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Marge: Thank You, and alarm clock or not
       he still would be a dream.

Shelly: Thank You, once up, I'm up no
        returning to la,la land until
        tonight.

Chris: Thank You, yes especially when
        you wake up and it feels like you         were really there.
Lost Dreamer
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6 posted 02-18-2000 11:12 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Denise: Thank You, you snuck in while I was         giving my thanks. Funny how you say         you want to go find him, I was just          about to go write a sequel as to             the thought of where this man is             now...LOL.

        
Martie
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How come I never have dreams like that?  Enjoyed the way you wrote about it.
Elizabeth Santos
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8 posted 02-18-2000 01:37 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Don't you know you can extend a dream?
Just turn off the alarm, go back into the dream mode, picking up where the dream left off, remember, his "unending body". Just that phrase makes me want to throw the clock out the window. Now go back and put whatever ending you want on the dream. It doesn't get any better than that
Oh, I forgot, I loved your poem
Liz
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9 posted 02-18-2000 03:46 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I can't wait to see the sequel, Gloria! This should be fun! I'll see what I can conjure up in the meantime! Thanks for another wonderful idea!


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10 posted 02-18-2000 05:29 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Martie: Thank You, How come I don't either?
        This was an illusion believe me if
        he appeared in my dream the way he
        is here, I would have thrown that
        alarm clock out the window, then
        returned to continue where we left
        off. I have a challenge for all here
        that want to venture. Where would
        this dream go next, or where does
        this Magical Man go next, who will
        he visit in their dreams.

Elizabeth: Thank You, as I said above it was
           not a dream at all in the physical
           sense.
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11 posted 02-18-2000 10:57 PM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

Hey Dreamer, This poem should have been mine, I'm the dancer, and the rhymer, you best stop stealing my poems.
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12 posted 02-19-2000 06:22 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Nurse C: Did you notice how you addressed me?That was my embodiment in this poem, Yes there was a dance but not yours to be had this time. You may be my rhyme so to say, but what's yours is mine, and mine is yours so together we will enhance each other. Now go back to sleep so you can do your dancing another time.

[This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 02-19-2000).]
hoot_owl_rn
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Hey....can I borrow your dreams for a while, mine haven't been so good as of late. Wouln't mind dreaming him into my life at all  
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14 posted 02-19-2000 10:33 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Ruth, if he could aid in healing all your troubles you could have him for a life time, just let me borrow him now and then. If he were mine I would be in heaven and heaven's not ready for me yet so he's free to share.
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I have a wonderous Magic Man,
Who walks within my dreams.
He doesn't sweep me off my feet,
Or break me at the seams.

He loves me with a gentle heart,
He holds me in his arms.
He takes me fishing on a boat,
He woes me with his charms.

He helps me with the dishes,
The children he does love.
He holds me on the couch at night,
Calls me his turtle dove.

My Magic Man is not a god,
Unattainable lost dream.
He is very normal,
We make the perfect team.
Justin Tolerable
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Hey Dreamer, if you need a man,
To fill you up with dreams.
I am the man your looking for,
I'm the best of all the creams.

I'll dance with you and hold you close,
And pinch you on your rear.
I'll whisper lots of naughty things,
Right there in your ear.

I'll let you worship all of me,
The very ground I walk.
I might even let you,
Listen when I talk.

I don't want no back talk,
Or agrumentive flack.
Just tell me I am wonderful,
Now get off of my Back!
Lost Dreamer
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17 posted 02-19-2000 01:06 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Justin: I am sorry, your a little to forward for me, if you noticed the man in the poem was my illusion of a magical man, your proposal does not portray magic of a man in any form I'd care to visit. First and foremost come the eyes, you can read the story of their lives through those beautiful hues. I think this needs to be another poem so I will not continue telling what eyes can do, I've just challanged myself.
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18 posted 02-19-2000 02:26 PM       View Profile for Lady in Red   Email Lady in Red   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Lady in Red's Home Page   View IP for Lady in Red

Dearest Lost Dreamer

This sounds exactly as the dream I lived only recently, except for the alarm. Thank goodness there was no alarm around !


Dear Crachet

What on earth made you decline
The King's offer for the next dance ?
In his arms I had a time devine
Could have been yours, if you'd taken the chance !

Lost Dreamer
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19 posted 02-19-2000 09:39 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Lady in Red: Welcome to Passions, sounds like you must have had fun. Thanks for your response.
 
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