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Magical Man |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Magical Man Out on the dance floor he stood there longing more as the band began a slow dance, with interest I did prance over to his tall built presence lacking the element of female essence. Mesmerized by his stunning blue eyes I slowly realize how time flies. Frozen in a state of unbelievable intrigue seemed he belonged in a different league. Our arms now encompassing each other I felt comfort like that of my mother. So soft and gentle was his embrace I desired to never leave this place. The graceful manner to his steps took my emotions through many depths. His unending body radiated chemistry sending me into a whirl of mystery. I felt my heart beating out of control my body heat rising hotter than coal. I was lost in this dancer's magnitude desiring to reach deep into his altitude. All of a sudden I hear the alarm scream realizing this magical man is only a dream. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LostDreamer~ Throw that alarm clock out !  Go back to bed ! I like this. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Shelley Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 263Ohio, USA |
I like this, but I agree with Marge, throw the alarm clock out and go back to bed! LOL |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Gosh...don't ya just hate that? wonderful read. Chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I just hate that when that happens!! Wow! What a dream.......hmmmmmmm....maybe I'll go back to bed and try to dream him up!! This is wonderful, Gloria! I love it!! Denise |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Marge: Thank You, and alarm clock or not he still would be a dream. Shelly: Thank You, once up, I'm up no returning to la,la land until tonight. Chris: Thank You, yes especially when you wake up and it feels like you were really there. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Denise: Thank You, you snuck in while I was giving my thanks. Funny how you say you want to go find him, I was just about to go write a sequel as to the thought of where this man is now...LOL. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
How come I never have dreams like that? Enjoyed the way you wrote about it. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Don't you know you can extend a dream? Just turn off the alarm, go back into the dream mode, picking up where the dream left off, remember, his "unending body". Just that phrase makes me want to throw the clock out the window. Now go back and put whatever ending you want on the dream. It doesn't get any better than that Oh, I forgot, I loved your poem Liz |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I can't wait to see the sequel, Gloria! This should be fun! I'll see what I can conjure up in the meantime! Thanks for another wonderful idea!  Denise |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Martie: Thank You, How come I don't either? This was an illusion believe me if he appeared in my dream the way he is here, I would have thrown that alarm clock out the window, then returned to continue where we left off. I have a challenge for all here that want to venture. Where would this dream go next, or where does this Magical Man go next, who will he visit in their dreams. Elizabeth: Thank You, as I said above it was not a dream at all in the physical sense. |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
Hey Dreamer, This poem should have been mine, I'm the dancer, and the rhymer, you best stop stealing my poems. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Nurse C: Did you notice how you addressed me?That was my embodiment in this poem, Yes there was a dance but not yours to be had this time. You may be my rhyme so to say, but what's yours is mine, and mine is yours so together we will enhance each other. Now go back to sleep so you can do your dancing another time. [This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 02-19-2000).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Hey....can I borrow your dreams for a while, mine haven't been so good as of late. Wouln't mind dreaming him into my life at all  |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Ruth, if he could aid in healing all your troubles you could have him for a life time, just let me borrow him now and then. If he were mine I would be in heaven and heaven's not ready for me yet so he's free to share. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
I have a wonderous Magic Man, Who walks within my dreams. He doesn't sweep me off my feet, Or break me at the seams. He loves me with a gentle heart, He holds me in his arms. He takes me fishing on a boat, He woes me with his charms. He helps me with the dishes, The children he does love. He holds me on the couch at night, Calls me his turtle dove. My Magic Man is not a god, Unattainable lost dream. He is very normal, We make the perfect team. |
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Justin Tolerable Junior Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 13 |
Hey Dreamer, if you need a man, To fill you up with dreams. I am the man your looking for, I'm the best of all the creams. I'll dance with you and hold you close, And pinch you on your rear. I'll whisper lots of naughty things, Right there in your ear. I'll let you worship all of me, The very ground I walk. I might even let you, Listen when I talk. I don't want no back talk, Or agrumentive flack. Just tell me I am wonderful, Now get off of my Back! |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Justin: I am sorry, your a little to forward for me, if you noticed the man in the poem was my illusion of a magical man, your proposal does not portray magic of a man in any form I'd care to visit. First and foremost come the eyes, you can read the story of their lives through those beautiful hues. I think this needs to be another poem so I will not continue telling what eyes can do, I've just challanged myself. |
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Lady in Red Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 147 |
Dearest Lost Dreamer This sounds exactly as the dream I lived only recently, except for the alarm. Thank goodness there was no alarm around ! Dear Crachet What on earth made you decline The King's offer for the next dance ? In his arms I had a time devine Could have been yours, if you'd taken the chance ! |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Lady in Red: Welcome to Passions, sounds like you must have had fun. Thanks for your response. |
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