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A Romantic Turnpike of Events (sequel to she knocka me out)

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wayoutwalt
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In recollection of events
That took me into captivity
I blubbered like a girl I said
Voyeurism's my proclivity

Her stockings tied me to the handle
Of a classic El Camino
Then she started that ole junker
Heading north I hoped for Reno

Thank God for ole El Caminos
I kept up at a lizards pace
She pulled my tail off in the end
And fed it to me through my face

Stockings might not be a lady's choice
But what about silver switchblades (stilettos)
She sliced the threads and left for dead
As I woke up in the everglades (ghetto)              


I hoped you didnt expect that she'd just jump my bones like that o no as i slowly recall this tale i remem (no not her tail although..) i remember more and more...
                





[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 02-18-2000).]
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Denise
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Sounds like a pretty harrowing experience you had there, Walt. You have to be careful of those chics in stilettos...you never know where you might wake up.....hehehehe

Denise
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Walt, Cute sequel, not what I expected though, you really put a twist on it.
Poet deVine
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How do you do it? LOL
Nan
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Girls blubber??? you sure, walt???
...and the everglades have a ghetto??? I knew they had the smallest post office in the country - but I didn't know about the ghetto - You're work is just sooooooo enlightening...Thankee....
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5 posted 02-19-2000 11:13 AM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

ROTFL

 "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

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When lizards collide
Do they call that a TurnPike  
What a ROFLMBO Walt

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

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