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mm
New Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 8


0 posted 2000-02-18 02:16 AM


I WISH LIFE WAS A LITTLE SIMPLIER...
HOPED WE NEVER CROSSED PATHS
I WISH I  COULD START ALL OVER...
SOMEONE NEW ,SOMEONE DIFFERENT
IF ONLY !
BUT THAT LIFE,ONE'S NEVER HAPPY WITH WHAT ONE HAS..
BUT ALAS HOW CAN YOU BE HAPPY IF YOU HAVE NONE TO COMPARE THEE..
DON'T MISJUDGE ME YOU WERE NOT GREAT
NOT EXTRA ORDINARY...
JUST PALE OLD OKAY..
THERE WERE GOOD TIMES AS WELL AS BAD TIMES...

I PRAY EACH DAY THAT THAT LIFE WOULD BE DIFFERENT..

© Copyright 2000 mm - All Rights Reserved
Wizzard
Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209

1 posted 2000-02-18 03:15 AM


WELCOME MM,
NICE READ.
KEEP WRITING AND I`LL KEEP READING

WIZZ....A MAN..LOL
INSIDE JOKE...SORRY

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.


CMGrimm
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685
USA
2 posted 2000-02-18 08:51 AM


Welcome to Passions MM.  Nice first post. You show alot of emotion and care through your writing, nicely done.  Looking forward to reading more of you in the future.

Chris
(Also a man)
(Just playing in Wiz's inside joke)
(Although I really have no idea what it is-LOL)

Welcome anyhow dear friend.  You'll do just fine here.

Chris


 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.

Cerenity
Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
3 posted 2000-02-20 11:40 AM


mm, Hi,

Life simplier yes please.
Think it would be better with someone else, sometimes.
But trying to believe what I have is worth fighting for, trying very hard.
Liked your poem.

Cerenity-1

just_another_fe
Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483
MICHIGAN
4 posted 2000-02-20 03:40 PM


YUP IT WOULD BE NICE IF LIFE WAS SIMPLER AND I WITH I NEVER CROSSED HIS PATH.I WISH I COULD START OVER AND NEVER SAY HI TO HIM BUT WHATS ALL THE WISHING IF WE CANT MAKE IT HAPPEN   NICE POEM
mm
New Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 8

5 posted 2000-02-21 06:34 AM


to
just another fe
cerenity 1
cmgrimm
wizzard

thanks guys....for welcome note...i really
feel like part of the 'a family of friends"

i will keep writing and you  keep writing as well so we can read and enjoy each other poetry...


for now...

mm




sonjes
Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564
North Carolina
6 posted 2000-02-21 06:59 AM


Life can be a neverending wish, I know. I wish you have a long and pleasant stay here. I wish I could read more poems by mm, I wish... Ah, the list goes on and on.  Welcome, mm, I enjoyed the poem.  
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