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The Things I Never Said

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Marina
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The Things I Never Said

A tormented heart never revealed
Tears of pain in hidden eyes
A challenged soul masquerades what it conceals
In fancy costumes, there the truth lies


With wine upon lips, the erotic pleasures to hold
Selfish sins of a gold band
Darkness whispers scandals untold
Love set free to the one who holds the left hand


I say now what I never said
A friend in me no better will you find
Should you stray from the path you are lead
Come to me if only in my mind
And let me say the things I never said


Marina Feb 13/2000

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Parker
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Marina, the more I read this one the more I love it. The held back truths, the pain in those emotions. This is a wonderful piece.

Parker
Marina
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2 posted 02-18-2000 09:29 AM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

James: Thank-you, this is the only poem I have written based on one of my lessons in life.  Every time you close a door always open a window...

Marina
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Marina...this one gave me chills.
Such a lesson to be learned.
thank You

Chris.

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.
Marina
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4 posted 02-18-2000 10:46 AM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Chris: One of the hardest things in life is to set a wrong right and give back what you stole because it was never yours to really take.

Marina


[This message has been edited by Marina (edited 02-18-2000).]
Danny Holloway
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5 posted 02-18-2000 11:11 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

A very nice poetic style and choice of words.
You truly have a poet's touch I think!
Well done!
Danny
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6 posted 02-18-2000 12:37 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Danny: Thank-you  very much for such a vote of confidence.  Since I have only been writing for about a week and only come up with about five poems in my whole life, I can't tell you how much your kind words mean to me.

Marina
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Marina,
This is wonderful.  So many times we keep the truth but know it needs to be said, even if only for our own.  Great emotion.
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Marina~ there are so many aspects of life this can be related to. Such a wonderful poem! Really enjoyed it. -SEA
Marina
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Truewomen: Thanks and I think your right.  The important thing is to remember to always be truthful to yourself.

Sea: I think almost everyone has had a situation at one time or another that this can possibly relate too.  Thanks for your input.

Marina
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Very nicely done, Marina!  

Denise
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Denise: thank-you I really appreciate your post.
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I would have replied sooner but my computer is still acting up....grrrrrr
I'm doing my best to get caught up!  

Denise
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Denise: That's OK!!  I'm just glad you liked it!

Marina
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