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Illiterate Alliterations..........a Poetry Challenge! (Tee Hee!)
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Illiterate Alliterations..........a Poetry Challenge! (Tee Hee!) |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Ya'll are always doing these poetry challenges, so here's mine! Delilah’s Dance Delilah’s drips downright delightfully, pink parasol protruding from pina punch, jammin’ to jingles in the jungles of Jamaica, she is sassy sans swimsuit in the cerulean sea, lady’s looking for a lover with a lasting libido. Mitchel’s a meandering mojo man mooching money, working as a waiter, while wangling women, he has a habit of hastening to his headboard ideas of ill intentions, importunate impulses, denoting the dance of the demonstrative Delilah. Traveling towards tacit titillation tonight, Supping on swordfish and sipping Sauvignon, Aroused by awaiting arranged assignations de amore, Cupid caught cosmic cadence,casually causing a calamity. Love landed like lady luck on a lark. Nurtured nirvana is now nonpareil, Incredible, isn’t it? © 2000 Corinne Bailey p.s. Disclaimers notwithstanding, the names have been changed, although this poem never did reflect upon anyone of any name in his forum. Give me a break, Wizzard. [This message has been edited by Corinne (edited 02-17-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is excellent, Corinne! Whew! What a tale! Denise |
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Wizzard Member
since 2000-02-09
Posts 209 |
WOW!!! I like a challenge as much as the next guy but there`s something in your challenge that`s a little disturbing to me... "Michael’s a meandering mojo man mooching money, working as a waiter, while wangling women, he has a habit of hastening to his headboard ideas of ill intentions, importunate impulses, denoting the dance of the demonstrative Delilah" ....as you may know there is one heck of a Man in Passions that`s going thru a rough time and this having the same name just doesn`t look very inviting...Im sorry if I have come across as a Capital...JACKASS but Im just trying to help you out on this one.. Forgive me if Im outta line k? Your friend WIZZARD  Today is the first day of the rest of my life. And the begining of a new one. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Denise, thank you! Wizzard,see comments above, please... Corinne |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is too good to get buried so quickly! Back up you go!!!!! Denise |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
This is too, much Corinne, you have one wild imagination. You win the challenge hands down, Delilah. Parker |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you again, Denise, you are such a nice person! Parker, parker, parker...Thank you, too! Corinne |
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