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Illiterate Alliterations..........a Poetry Challenge! (Tee Hee!)

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Corinne
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state of confusion


0 posted 02-17-2000 09:56 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Corinne

Ya'll are always doing these poetry challenges, so here's mine!


Delilahís Dance

Delilahís drips downright delightfully,
pink parasol protruding from pina punch,
jamminí to jingles in the jungles of Jamaica,
she is sassy sans swimsuit in the cerulean sea,
ladyís looking for a lover with a lasting libido.

Mitchelís a meandering mojo man mooching money,
working as a waiter, while wangling women,
he has a habit of hastening to his headboard
ideas of ill intentions, importunate impulses,
denoting the dance of the demonstrative Delilah.

Traveling towards tacit titillation tonight,
Supping on swordfish and sipping Sauvignon,
Aroused by awaiting arranged assignations de amore,
Cupid caught cosmic cadence,casually causing a calamity.

Love landed like lady luck on a lark.

Nurtured nirvana is now nonpareil,
Incredible, isnít it?

© 2000 Corinne Bailey

p.s. Disclaimers notwithstanding, the names have been changed, although this poem never did reflect upon anyone of any name in his forum.  Give me a break, Wizzard.




[This message has been edited by Corinne (edited 02-17-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Corinne - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 02-17-2000 10:29 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is excellent, Corinne! Whew! What a tale!

Denise
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2 posted 02-17-2000 10:36 PM       View Profile for Wizzard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wizzard

WOW!!!
I like a challenge as much as the next guy but there`s something in your challenge that`s a little disturbing to me...
"Michaelís a meandering mojo man mooching money,
working as a waiter, while wangling women,
he has a habit of hastening to his headboard
ideas of ill intentions, importunate impulses,
denoting the dance of the demonstrative Delilah"
....as you may know there is one heck of a Man in Passions that`s going thru a rough time and this having the same name just doesn`t look very inviting...Im sorry if I have come across as a Capital...JACKASS but Im just trying to help you out on this one..
Forgive me if Im outta line k?
Your friend WIZZARD

 Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
And the begining of a new one.

Corinne
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3 posted 02-17-2000 11:19 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Denise, thank you!

Wizzard,see comments above, please...

Corinne
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4 posted 02-18-2000 10:44 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is too good to get buried so quickly! Back up you go!!!!!

Denise
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5 posted 02-18-2000 11:46 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

This is too, much Corinne, you have one wild imagination. You win the challenge hands down, Delilah.

Parker
Corinne
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6 posted 02-18-2000 05:22 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Thank you again, Denise, you are such a nice person!

Parker, parker, parker...Thank you, too!


Corinne
 
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