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Puzzle Pieces |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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An unseen mistress, ignorant of love's misfortune. Strategems of Love--Justice denied. and Parker's cruel hands belong to a man of questionable taste--promises implied. Passions strained like dogs chained, sonnets dropping clues. Chinese water torture. (Bet you kick puppies, too.) Delusions of allusions dancing in charade. I should have been content with Donne, safely in his grave. Unseen eyes analyze-- studies love like a bug rudely pinned... makes mental notes of puzzling quotes, love's voice, mere mimic, once again. I can not write falsely for purpose of misleading... so, "Welcome to the Forum!", luv, I'm pleased to know you're reading. But every word, you should have heard for years, from my lips, pleading... Last piece now. See? It fits. I'm smiling at the thought of it. In closing, yet another quote from Ms. Parker's wiry hand. Eloquent, simple and direct, so even you can understand: " I do not give a damn." |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
............is it safe to reply ? ............ Wow ... said with such passion ... excellent Rex}<{{{{o> |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
yep, powerful and passionate. great poem, serenity! Denise |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
I believe I detect a healthy dose of "wrath" in this one. Very, very nice to read such powerful words. |
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